[WIP] demons like you and I: a dark horror fantasy romance *updated profiles*

[Lui_P]

Actually kind of creepy, the Scene with the old lady got me xD
Absolutely loved it!
Keep up the good work!

[wyvern]

Thank you!

[Sel_Lee]

c l o s e e y e s i n t u n n e l i t c a n s e e
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[wyvern]

I have no idea what you’re talking about

Thanks for playing!

[Pandaren]

Listen. LISTEN.

That had me SPOOKED, you hear me? SPOOKED.

[Avi]

THERE’S AN UPDATE!! My eyes have been blessed thank u.

Lovely author, do you plan on opening up a tumblr/discord/smth??

[wyvern]

Thank you!! I’m glad you’re as esctatic as I am about the story!
And I haven’t thought about making one, since we’re in the early stages yet, but I think when the story is a bit more established, it might be a fun idea!

[wyvern]

Thank you, this is really fantastic feedback!! You’re absolutely right, and it would be good to establish how the MC feels before the group chat.

I tried to write it so that you find out about your past from talking to them (i.e. being able to ask questions such as “why did you leave?”), but it would be good to add a few lines beforehand too for clarity.

For your other point, it’s infered from your text convos: they tell you that they are waiting outside the station, and I tried to code it so that if you skip the texting or never read the text they sent you, you can only say “Excuse me” when shouting out to them… But that whole meeting needs a lot of work

Sorry for the long rambling reply, I hope that made sense, and I’ll definitely change some of these things so it plays and reads better, thank you!

[Zanite]

I really like the email/text idea, great for immersion and getting to know the characters a bit!

[Sel_Lee]

Oh, the options where you walk away from Jackson without acknowledging him give you an error so I thought that was all the wip had.

I keep getting 404 errors. It’s most likely because you didn’t wrap up your endings with *finish or *ending. Make sure to add a blurb saying “this is the end of this route” or something whenever you hit an end.

[SaladAss]

Yeah same. I keep getting the same error too.

[Ezra_Wolf]

Love at first read!!! I’d really like to see more of Little Pickering and the other characters… And…

Watch out for the Nose!!! Yeah, the

[beespls]

Ahhhh this is so good! Are you thinking of adding a tumblr for updates and such? I’d definitely follow for updates!!

[SpanishBrEaD]

If you like fae and vampire stuffs with wholesome action packed thriller horror themed and steamy sex scenes I suggest u guys read the Anita Blake series and Meredith Gentry series

yours truly SPANISHBREAD

[cone]

I don’t know if it’s just me but every time I head to the meeting place with Jackson it doesn’t work and instead say ‘Our apologies; there was a 404 error while loading game data. Please refresh your browser now; if that doesn’t work, please email support-external@choiceofgames.com with details.’ Is that suppose to happen or?

[Barb]

Absolutely wonderful! Your writing is fantastic and the character interaction is on point. I loved the phone features and the errie spooky feel of the town. I’m really looking forward to reading more of this game.

[wyvern]

Thank you so much to you all for your kind and supportive words! I didn’t want to post here until I made another update, but I also didn’t want it to look like I’ve abandoned this
I’ve been writing, but I’ve also been incredibly busy with life, and I’ve hit a bit of a brick wall… I’m rewriting some of the beginning with better character introductions and more memories from your childhood, but I’m finding it so difficult to make it flow without losing pacing, and I don’t want to drag out back story. I’ve ended up writing and scrapping so many small vignettes, I could actually just make an entire deleted scenes section/bloopers, which is mad because have you ever considered books/text games having bloopers? And I’m still writing the first chapter…

@beespls thank you! I would love to make a Tumblr, but maybe when I’ve added a bit more to the story! I wouldn’t even know what to post to Tumblr right now for updates

@cone if you mean the part where you’ve both been to the liqueur store, and now you’re heading to your friends house, then that’s where the demo ends right now! I’d add a page at the end where it lets you know that this is the end of the demo, but my dumb ass didn’t save a copy of that version before I started making edits

@Barb thank you so much! I’m happy you like it so far