What makes someone a monster? The choices they make throughout their lives? The actions they take? Their upbringing? Is it destiny? Are some people simply born that way?
But the most important question is, who are you willing to become a monster for?
Vague Plot Summary
You were born as a bastard into a family of powerful mages, hated and reviled since birth due to your abnormal status. You are the Antithesis, the opposite of what being a mage stands for. A series of events will lead you into open conflict with the society which hates your existence.
Features
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Cut and rend your way through countless mages
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Six unique romance paths you lock-in early in the story, changing your character’s future
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Wield legendary weapons
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Choose how and if magical society dies
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SHOW THE WORLD YOUR RAGE
Brief Description of RO's
These are all subject to change
Name: Victoria Oliveira
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Height: 5’6
Description: The heiress to the Oliveira, The Lords of the Night. The person who lent you a lifeline. You owe your life to her and her family. How far are you willing to follow her when things go wrong?
Name: Na’rushalei Aiqah Uhania
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Height: 6’6
Description: Na’ru is a Thu’anayn, a race of dragon-like people; she is the last of her kind. You and Oliveira rescue her and take her into your care. She is the spark that lights the fires of war. Will you be willing to abandon everything for her to see tomorrow?
Name: Cassian Amadeus Atticus Italus
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Height: 5’11
Description: A god-tier mage and influential person in the magical community. One whose interest may align with yours. Will the two of you come to lean on each other in your crusade against the status quo?
Name: Morrigan Alakin
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Height:
Description: Your childhood acquaintance whom you were supposed to be forced to marry. This did not end up happening. Years later, your paths collide again. Only time will tell whether you are capable of playing nice anymore.
Name: Chloé Auclair
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Height: 5’11
Description: Chloé Auclair is a manipulative, conviving, callus, and bad person. She also offers you a lifeline. Only time will tell if you two can trust each other and work together.
Name: Hemah
Age: ???
Gender: Male
Height: 6’7
Description: “Fall on us and hide us from the face of him who is seated on the throne"*
What I am looking for
- Typos, grammar, and other errors you find.
- Continuity errors, I want to make sure it all flows right.
- General critiques of the writing, just keep it constructive
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Hello all, I’m Dr. Dense.
Some of you may recognize me from my other WIP, Broken Fable. Rest assured, I am still working on Broken Fable. Antithesis started as something I would write on the side when I was feeling overwhelmed and/or burnt out with Broken Fable. Over the years, it has actually turned into something I am quite happy with and think it is good enough to start sinking some effort into.
As always, have a good day, and I would appreciate hearing your thoughts!
Be warned: This story contains some dark elements. Overall, it is fairly light, but if reading about any of the below makes you uncomfortable, I recommend reading with caution and skipping anything you do not like.
Content Warnings
- Depression
- Suicide
- Drug abuse, alcoholism, and smoking
- A lot of murder and gore
- Arranged marriage
- Child abuse
- Implied sexual assault
Demo: CoGDemos
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