War of Genealogy: Hunter Sky (WIP) - Seeking Feedback

Hey everyone!

What do you guys think of having leisure activities in the game, like fishing, hunting, cooking, or drawing? Maybe have random battle encounters when you travel. Someone said something about adding injuries so that really does sound like a fun little addition. All in all I want to capture the essence of a free-roam game where you can go places, even though this game is text-based.

If you don’t like any activities then we can just keep it about the plot.

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Yes. Add some side activities in here to make it more fun. Besides I think it would be a bit fast paced for the plot if nothing else was added. I can imagine our knights in training having some time off so this is the best way to fill it in.

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Thanks! Glad you agree with the activities as well. I’ll definitely be including them in between chapters then.

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Whoo weeee!!! Been quite a while since any activity’s been in this thread, but I just want to let everyone know that the WIP is still well, WIPING lol. My plan was for weekly updates but the schedule does not seem to like lending itself to one’s passion. How selfish is a schedule​:disappointed::triumph: Right?

This chapter I’m writing has a lot more content than the others before and possibly to come, so I am writing like several different activities to do which end out in many different chapter length stories made into one. Chapter7

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Goodnight everyone. I am almost done with chapter 7 so you either tomorrow or the day after you can expect it to be released. My schedule is slowly freeing up. Hopefully I can get these chapters out faster.

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Chapter seven is finally finished guys! It will be uploaded in my next reply after this. Stay tuned! I think you guys will like this one.

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Chapter seven is here everyone. As usual any form of advice, feedback or opinion will be well appreciated. So don’t be shy. I hope you guys enjoy this chapter. Have fun!
https://dashingdon.com/play/matt-fusin-/hs-tales-/mygame/

I’ve started adding achievements to the game and updated some things in the show stats window.

There’s a similar conscept from FE Awakening that’s called team trust level. With this you can take a party of two to four into battle with you by earning their trust through different bonding activities.

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Hey there I really enjoyed your game an thought it was cool. I like the characters a lot but I would like if you added something like a backstory for some of the characters. I would want to see what made Jarell so withdrawn and Lea’s ambitions for wanting to become the only female knight in her county. I like the other characters too but Jirell and Lea are the ones I’m interested in most

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Thanks for feedback. Much appreciated!

I already have backstories written for some of the characters which I will put into certain parts of the story. I think you will enjoy them a lot.

There’s a lot detailing about Lea’s past and why she want’s to become a knight, but I don’t want to spoil them all here. Stay tuned!

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It took me a while to go through the story again, it seems that the saves were deleted since chapter six was released. Anyway, this just keeps getting better and better!

The dance part with Jirell was sweet, hopefully he’ll eventually tell us what made him accept. I also hope we get longer one-on-one moments with the main ROs later on. If you couldn’t already tell, I LIVE for the characters :sweat_smile:

I really like that you add minor and major scene variations as well, like when we get detention in an earlier chapter, and it seems that saving Ganta will also offer some nice branching.

As always, thanks for the update!! :blush:

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I can’t wait for the Kid giant Show what he got. Either for good Or ill personally, people with his talent and body structure can do a lot of good things Pretty much Build Towns and ships with that body structure. And for a Warrior’s lifestyle, he can cut a man and half if given them the proper weapon. I don’t get why people make fun of those people. What were the short people They have their strength and weaknesses like everyone else.

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Wow thanks for the feedback! I do apologize about the saves being lost earlier. I accidentally changed the save file name so that’s probably what caused it.

I’m glad you like the character interaction, and guess what? I love writing them too. There will definitely be a bit of branching with Ganta.

From here the story will get even better my friend. I have a lot of surprises planned for you guys. Oops! I’m saying too much. Erm, uh, you guys will see. Stay tuned!

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Hey there! Thanks for your feedback.

This is so true, that’s why I felt I had to put it in. Maybe to make people in real life aware of how people like that might feel. But Ganta may come back to repay you, or destroy you. Lol I’m just kidding about that last part😅, or I’m not🙂.

Either way what you said while describing Ganta could be used as awesome dialogue. The part about him cutting a man in half sounds better than what I came up with. Mind if I borrow that line Takashi?

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trust me I had a family That was in the military, so. And my grandmother was a sergeant so I was more frightened of her because she passed it down to my mother. So personally, I’m afraid of women than men. I treat them all equally on being terrifying. So does it matter if you’re A girl or a guy who are big and tall and strong or skinny. You can use your strength to your advantage. It’s just how they use it No one is useless. If they put their mind to it.

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Hi guys! Just a question of interest. What powers did you all choose? I went with the shougen. My reason is just that I think it’s cool lol.

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There is a gender bug for female mc in chapter 2 in our duel with Jirell the knight used male pronouns instead female pronouns when I lost the fight.

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Oops I missed that. Thanks alot for bringing it to my attention. I’ll get to fixing.

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That’s one of the abilities of the Shougen, so we both choose the same option. How cool😁

Yep, it definitely has the potential to be mad OP. But so do the other four if used correctly you know.

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i’m more of a limit breaker guy myself

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i’m stuck at the carnival with the only option available being pickpocketing, does it end here or is it a bug?

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