Vendetta (WIP) (Ash + Rin Hangout Updated on 20th August 2024) [384K Words Total])

The shadow hound ask reminded me of this meme :joy:

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Good doggy :meat_on_bone::bacon:

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Don’t really know if it was asked or answered before but will the Ash and Rin poly romance with the mc be a triad relationship or a V relationship and will we have the chance to choose or not

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My guess is that it will most likely be a relationship where it will be Ash and Rin x MC instead of Ash x Rin x MC since both of them are very attached to the MC and often (subtly) fight over them. Even if it’s verbally for now though I don’t think they hate each other enough to actually fight for real.

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It was answered before. It’s going to be V poly romance, not a triad.

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Triad!? I didn’t know another criminal organization was involved! JK.

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Triad poly relationship as in all individuals involved in the relationship are together either sexually or romantic or both

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I put in JK as in Just Kidding.

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@jsc just finished a playthrough after a while and loved the update that i hadnt gotten to yet. other then one gender typo i didnt encounter any bugs or the like as well very much looking forward to seeing what comes next and if some of my thoughts will bare fruit or not.

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GASP Young MC summoning shadow puppies at night for snuggles, adult still doing so on the bad nights. I just love that image of a cute little beagle made of shadows snuggling the MC to help them sleep.

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Stupid ask, when does this come up? Is it new update stuff?

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Love it , did play it once as stoic char and one impullsiv char, like how each one was a bit differnt how your mc reacts, cant wait for more :slight_smile:

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Oh, no, its just my own cute lil head canon :smiling_face:

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Aww, look at that cute smile! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Surely, they don’t bite and you can just pet the shadow hounds :blush:
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As the others have answered below, it would be a V poly :smile: :+1:

Funny that you bring them up… :eyes: :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

Oh! If you do come across the gender typo again, please, do let me know! :face_with_monocle: Somehow, there will always be one left no matter how hard I try to find and fix them :sob: Also, glad you love the update! :blush:

Awww :face_holding_back_tears: :face_holding_back_tears: That’s so adorableee :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
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Thank you! I’m glad you’re trying out different types of MC! :wink: I do try to make them feel or react a bit differently to some stuff.

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Chapter 6 Part 3 + Major System Public Update! :tada:


Hello everyone! :wave: It’s finally time for the public update! :grin: This update brings in 24K of new words, bringing Chapter 6 wordcount in total to 89.4K words and the total demo wordcount to 325.3K words! This update brings Chapter 6 to a neat close, which is important because to me, Chapter 6 is like the end of the first arc of the book.

Not only that, but I have also added a few major coding functions with this update, namely, a skip chapter function, and an autosave and reload function. I’m aware that my demo is getting longer, so I assume a skip chapter function might be a welcome addition.

It took me a long time to plan and figure out how to implement these systems, but in the end, after a lot of personal testing, I have finally managed to make them work.

WARNING: It’s highly advised that you either play from the beginning with clean saves (or try out the new skip chapter function). I messed with some of the old variables as well, including Santana’s and Skylar’s default relationship values. Do not reload the saves to avoid potential future errors.

What’s to expect from the new update:

  • Dropping Rin off to their apartment (and maybe, if you’ve been a good boy/girl, you can get a little smooch :kissing_heart:)
  • Have an angsty talk with Uncle Luka :disappointed_relieved:
  • But don’t worry, there are potential wholesome moments too (if you choose them, of course :wink:)
  • Another POV of the killer :smiling_imp: To see more on how they think and what they know so far.
  • Brand new skip chapter function! (Currently only for Chapter 6)
  • An autosave and reload function! (Currently only for Chapter 6)
  • Plus some new little stuff added in previous chapters.

New stuff added to previous chapters:

  • Chapter 2: Add proper introduction scene with Ivan and Boris, the twin bodyguards, highlighting their different personalities and their relationship with MC and Ash. They have changed quite a lot and become more fleshed out compared to the first time I wrote them.
  • Chapter 4: For MCs who said yes to Yvette when she asked them whether they are interested in becoming a Superhero, you now have the option to accept her guidance and reconnect with her or reject her guidance but still have a choice whether to reconnect with her or not. This is in contrast to how those who said yes was forced to reconnect with her.
  • Chapter 6: Meddle, fix, and add some background variables. Another reason to play from the beginning and to not load old saves.

Also, I have a side story just released on both Patreon and Ko-Fi and a spicy one coming really soon! I’m also still opening ideas/suggestions for this month’s side stories until November 11th and then after that, we’ll have our polls! So if you’re also interested in supporting me while also getting these exclusive contents, please do consider becoming a member! :sparkling_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Halloween + 5K Followers Celebration! :jack_o_lantern::tada:


Also, I forgot to crosspost this here a few days ago, but here it is :smiling_face: First of all, I want to say thank you so much for all the support you guys have shown me and my story so far :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Around a year since the demo first came out, we finally broke 5K followers milestone on Tumblr and broke through 1K replies and close to reaching 1K likes in this Forum post :blush::sparkling_heart:

For this special occasion, since it’s still around Halloween, I have now released the Vendetta Halloween Interactive Side Story Special to the public. It’s a wholesome little story with little MC, little Ash, and little Rin, along with the usual gang (Viktor, Cara, Takashi, and Luka) :laughing:

I’ll link the now-public Patreon post talking more about the Halloween Interactive Side Story, which also contain the link to the side story, at the end of this post :grin: Feel free to send asks about it too if you’d like :hugs:

If you guys enjoy it, please do consider supporting me on Patreon or Ko-Fi. I just released a side story today and the side story and spicy side story ideas request for November are still open. And after that, polls would be held to vote on the ideas :wink:A spicy side story is coming soon as well! So, a lot of stuff coming :sparkling_heart:

[Halloween Interactive Side Story]

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I’m not too sad about having to replay so the story is fresher in my mind :slightly_smiling_face:
I have not gotten very far with the new content yet but I can at least say that the ‘skip chapter’ function seems to work as intented.

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@jsc For the police’s commissioner’s execution scene using shadow powers (the one for “sending a message”). Would you consider changing it to where instead of impaling him with tentacles, you have our MC drag him out of the pool using the hellhounds and let them rip him apart like the wild animals they are? Or even summon a new shadow creature that’s water based like a crocodile or a few sharks and have them rip him apart. The tentacle scene just didn’t felt gruesome enough as compared to the gravity version since that version literally turns him into a broken ball of flesh.

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woah…gruesome much :skull_and_crossbones:

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Very gruesome; I like it.

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This guy is a hypocrite. Talking about my PC inheriting some of his father’s morals, then talking about him killing PC father as a necessity. Can’t wait for when my PC eventually meet him, it’s gonna be brutal @jsc really did a good job in portraying them though. They have a depth to them

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