I’m assuming the vid is a joke because Americans of Irish descent are indeed called Irish-Americans.
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Ash was really the best. Best future daughter-in-law first impression.
Chad Skylar: “Can I have your son for the rest of my life? Say yes! Say yes! Coz I need to know!”
Virgin Ash: “You! What the f*ck are you doing here?!”
One point for virgins🤣
Now I know why Luka approves of her so much
Also I don’t like that Newton guy and that private investigator lady who informed mom about the Nemesis project’s connection on Viktor’s death.
Why?
First this Newton guy. I don’t like the way he stares at MC when asking about his opinions about Nemesis project or Yvette. I know it’s logical to look at someone when you’re talking to them but the way the text describes his stares irked me. My insticts told me that this guy was a weirdo. My theory is that either he is the main guy or have some connections with the group. I could be wrong of course, this is just a theory after all.
Next this PI lady. I love that MC was already wary of her and I also agree with this wariness. The first thing that comes to my mind when I read what Yvette told MC is that arrogant mob boss from the chapter 3.
Again this is just a conspiracy theory.
Comments about Skylar and Santana
Skylar
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She’s nice and I love the flirt convos between her and MC. I know we also have flirt convos with Rin but the feeling is different. Rin’s convo was sensual while Skylar’s convo was more like a friendly flirt. Too bad my MC was already gunning for Rin and Ash, and was already set on becoming the next Morozov heir.
Hey author, can we just become flirt friends with Skylar if we’re not aiming to actually romance? You know like flirt with no actual weight on them? I mean I actually find her flirt convo with MC too entertaining. I know she have feelings too and you plan to make realistic ros but based on what I saw so far in her personality, I believe she’s the type to fine with it? Like I think we both believe that harmless and weightless flirts exist
Santana
- All I can say is that, if my MC is not romancing Ash and Rin, he’ll definitely go after this woman. Can’t wait to romance her and bully the whole police department. Vengeance indeed.
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Ah! I see now…but there are Italian Americans though 
I’m joking, its just an impression that everyone in NYC if they have Italian heritage they are Italian Americans (in movies, tv shows) and I thought Mexican as well (no matter if they are born on US soil) they consider them selfs Mexican.
But I get what you’re saying. Thanks for the explanation & the video though👌 I just assumed because their whole family is Russian, speaking Russian/English, the MC would be half/half and would know both cultures well.
Have I been trolled?
I’m so with you on that! The interaction with the cop was just amazing👌
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I found a couple of coding errors in chapter 4.
This is at the beginning of the chapter. It should be ash_romance < 3.
You didn’t add *set y_drink true if you offer a drink to your mother, so the flavor text for it doesn’t work.
*if ((sky_bold > sky_shy) and (sky_bold > sky_tsu))
"Um—I kinda already have your phone number saved," you admit bashfully.
This should be *if ((sky_shy > sky_bold) and (sky_shy > sky_tsu))
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The only issue I have with this demo is that it’s not on sale yet so I can buy it 
I hope CoG/HG don’t sit on it too long when you finish it
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Been a while since I checked this project, really happy to hear that there will be a Ash / Rin poly route.
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@AdelSad A lot of morally dubious if not straight up morally corrupt officials, especially those in the higher up 
Maybe one day I’ll be able to make another story where some of these government agencies play more role in it 
And yes, this event will sooner or later attract the FBI’s attention. They have been made aware of the existence of the Nemesis Project and it is considered to be a terrorist group. Right now, they have not really stepped in fully into the case, but if the ECPD keeps failing and stagnating in their progress, then they will take control of the whole case. Remember that the Nemesis Project has just revealed themselves really recently. Amethyst’s death was chalked up to suicide for quite some time, thanks to the Police Commissioner’s involvement.
@TheTal Amethyst’s death was investigated by the ECPD as well, but it was chalked up to suicide and the Agency went along with it and didn’t stop or thwart the Police Commissioner’s cover-up because honestly, saying Amethyst committed suicide wouldn’t hit their stock prices as bad as if it was revealed that she was hunted down and killed.
But the Agency still hired PIs to investigate who’s leaking all of this information, which at that time, did more damage to them than Amethyst’s death.
@Phenrex Yes 
It has always been there. What a perfect coincidence though
@Knoez I hope you like them! 
Let me know which one captures your heart more. I’ve seen some in my Discord server and in Tumblr asks who end up falling in love with Santana or Skylar more than Ash or Rin.
@Fenrir1 @Van1llaPudd1ng I’m really happy to hear that! 
Unfortunately, a harem with all the four ROs would be chaotic as hell 
@Van1llaPudd1ng Ooh… The angst 
It’s so good…! Skylar might seem like the less troubled RO, maybe after Rin, but that doesn’t mean that they don’t have something that they’re worried or keep thinking about. If your MC goes down their route, maybe you can help them settle some dilemma 
Sooner or later, you’ll need to choose one when you go down their route I’m also toying with the idea of decreasing Ash’s romance point if MC flirts with the other ROs (other than Rin) in front of them. They’re already doubting themself that MC actually feels something for them, and if they see MC flirts with Skylar or Santana in front of them, that would just strengthen their doubt, sadly 
I did write that intentionally 
Yes, the story is set in a fictional city in USA, North America. And also, as @TheTal said, Viktor raised MC in a more American lifestyle/way (?), although MC did learn more Russian and some Russian customs once they are taken in by Luka, mostly by exposure and spending time with Luka and Grandpa and Grandma.
Also, MC is introducing themselves to Skylar and Santana who are Americans, so I think it’ll make sense for MC to introduce themself like people do there, instead of the Russian way. Same thing with Rin too in the future once they met Skylar and Santana; they will introduce themself as Rin Aikawa instead of Aikawa Rin.
@Kanaya Another one who falls to Skylar’s charm 
I’m glad you love them! As for going after Rin and Skylar at the same time… I think Rin would feel annoyed, but they won’t show it outwardly of course Skylar would also be tense underneath their easygoing and charming veneer.
And as I said above, there will come a time where you’ll have to lock in your chosen RO. For one, you’ll have to choose two out of the four ROs route to focus on the playthrough and there, you’ll be able to lock in your choice. And once you’ve locked in your RO, you won’t be able to choose romantic options when talking with other ROs 
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Would having Rin and Ash get together on their own if you aren’t romancing either of them be a thing? Or does the poly work like a V and not like a triad? I always think it feels really cool, assuming they are attracted to each other since they would consider a poly in the first place, if they can develop without the MC being involved (assuming they aren’t interested in romancing either).
@GhostofGrief I’m glad you love the fight scene! I actually had a blast writing the fight scenes, especially the more brutal ones. But I gotta admit it almost drove me a bit crazy since I had to write 8 variations 4 lethal (for CQC + Umbra, CQC + Grav, Non-CQC + Umbra, and Non-CQC + Grav) and same thing for the other 4 non-lethal variations.
@Xoromin Skylar might be a little vain sometimes, but they are definitely not a narcissist who really needs that attention and fame. They’re actually really different from Yvette despite how similar their backgrounds are: Both come from a wealthy family, although Skylar’s family is far richer and more influential, especially now in the story since their father is currently the Mayor of the city. Both also found themself thrown into stardom at young age as rising star superheroes.
It is the section that probably takes most time compared to other sections in the chapter. There are a lot of variations and variables and conversation and choices to write 
I think around 12.5K words of the 46K words are dedicated wholly to talk with her.
But I’m really satisfied with how it turns out and that all the time and effort I poured into it are worth it 
@Crimson_Blood Ash is so loyal They’re definitely ready to throw some hands with Yvette if MC asks them to or if Yvette makes MC really upset. Also, Skylar doesn’t even need to ask Yvette 
They are the RO that Yvette would approve of the most, and she would have loved to try matchmake them if only she is not absent in MC’s life. While for Viktor, Cara, and Luka, Ash would be their most approved one.
I gotta admit I giggled a bit when I read that you don’t like Newton Because I’ve had some people who thirsted after him a bit and thought he is hot I suppose I do have too many attractive DILFs (and MILFs too, I have an Artbreeder of Rin’s mother, Azami, in my Tumblr, btw ) 
I’m not sure yet because there are already too many conversation options and variations I gotta write 
Maybe I can make it as Sarcastic responses instead, I’ll see once I get to write it.
I’m glad you guys are loving Santana as well! I was worried they might get overshadowed by the other ROs since they are the most ‘normal’ and temperate RO compared to the others 
MC’s family might be the closest thing to their highest, real bosses, so definitely, MC would be able to do something 
@Isabel Thank you so much for reporting these! I have fixed them!
@LordOfLA Aww, thanks for the kind words! 
@Dragomer It has not been implemented yet currently in the demo, but it is something I’m interested in implementing
@Phenrex No, they won’t They have never had romantic feelings for each other. And yes, the poly is a V-Poly with MC being in a relationship with both Ash and Rin at the same time, but Ash and Rin are only best and close friends with each other.
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Hey guys
Just a really minor update, but these are the stuff added:
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Finished adding the Character Guide entries for Santana and Skylar in the Stat Screen.
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Added emotionless responses to Skylar’s flirtations.
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Fixed a couple of coding errors and some typos and grammatical errors.
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Awww yis. The good ol “I DUNNO WHO TO CHOOSE” dilemma.
“My romantic life will come down to spinning a wheel! Or a Magic 8 Ball. Because I’m indecisive as hell.”
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I thought Skylar is typical stuck up superheroes like Yvette but he is quite humble eventhough sometimes his vision sound naïve. As for Santana I don’t know I just love the way you portray him and it is nice to see someone “normal” 
I’m still dead set to romance Ash alone because I never interest in poly one. But of course I will also try to romance other RO (just to see Ash reaction to that )
Oh and btw will we get steamy scene with RO? I’d love to get some NSFW scene btw 
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The characters interactions with Santana and Skylar were excellent, and I’m already completely in love with Santana 
(I NEED MORE OF THEM 
), awesome work dear Author 
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I am intrigued. I guess a imma be replaying the game 25 times now to see it ALLLL!
Ohhh…it’s so interesting the way you write Ash. They seam so confident, ruthless and self-assured but it looks like the MC is their weak spot…like they have this constant back and forth about their feeling toward MC, really interesting. I did catch on that when they are with MC, it’s like the hard shel comes off…are we Ashs kryptonite?
I absolutely love & appreciate all the little “Easter eggs” or little things you’ve put in there, you do it so good! Its never obvious but when you get see it you just giggle to your self, like sharing a private joke) really cool👌
They really feel drastically different, all 4 RO feel different - in my opinion. You didn’t just give them different characteristic (when describing them) but you also write their dialog really different you can feel the difference and their personality, values, and how they react to the world - its actually really great and hard work ( I can only imagine). 
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I only got one flirt point with Rin because I wanted to mess with Takashi. His reaction is so hilarious lol
And then I felt bad because I was betraying my baby Ash.
But to be honest, the second RO who caught my eyes is Santana, they look so tired, I just want to pamper them, buy them a new car!
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And this is why I just make multiple MCs. 
I currently have 3 for this one, and am considering a 4th.
I always like the option where when Rin says they hope youd had a nice day you can say you hope their day gets better now that you’re there, and Rin will give a flirtatous response just to mess with Takashi, and the text will say that teasing Takishi is yours and Rin’s favorite passtime.
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I absolutely love the interactions with Detective Valdez so far, the whole dynamic you can go for there is just fantastically heartwarming…
she was the one I least expected to like, but turns out I like her the most so far, a welcome surprise! 
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I’ve only just discovered this demo now, and I’m really loving it so far! I love Ash and am going for them right now, but Rin is also a cutie. The personality stats are also nice, and I like that it’s not stat-check-heavy.
Anyway I’m only on Chapter 2 so far and this is basically my only thoughts as of the moment.
For the record, I read here that Takashi is in an unrequited love thing, but I thought it was funny.
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He did in my heart (and the whole AU thing)
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@Kanaya Ash: “MC! How could you do this? We’ve known each other since forever! How could you let a Magic 8 Ball decide who you’re going to date? 
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@Knoez I think Skylar might’ve been more similar to Viktor, less the naïveté. Also, I sometimes felt kinda bad for Santana because people would sent asks on Tumblr like, “Can you rank the ROs from the wealthiest to the least?” and “Which ROs are most popular and which are not?” And it’s always Santana at the bottom for all these questions
I’m not sure yet. I’m leaning towards no at the moment, maybe fade-to-black or less explicit ones? But nothing is set in stone yet. Even now, I’m still getting used to writing steamy stuff for the spicy side stories in my Patreon 
@Duck_Ben @Mercz94 Wow, Santana keeps winning people over! 
Good for them, good for them! 
Also, thank you for the kind words! 
@Van1llaPudd1ng Yes 
MC is Ash’s weak spot and kryptonite. Really, if someone really wants to truly, truly hurt Ash, they’ll go after MC, that is if they can kidnap MC in the first place and if Ash finds them… There’ll be nothing left of them once they’re done.
Aww, I’m glad you enjoy them
Thank you so much for the kind words and compliments I really wanted them to feel different from each other, each with their own motivations and personalities in mind.
@XaosMinion Takashi is such a fun character to write, honestly. I love him.
Why stop at car? Some members in my Discord channel have talked about wanting to buy Santana various things, from designer-brand clothes to deer and peacocks, to renovating the entire ECPD station for them
@Cat-Toes Lol, poor Takashi. He really had his hopes up for a second there MC and Rin did him dirty on that one…
@prosebrose Ay, new reader! I’m glad you’re loving the story so far! And yeah, I’m not really a big fan of putting too much stat-checks all over. I usually just reserve it for big stuff like action/fighting scenes and mission stuff.
Lmao, this makes me giggle. And what a perfect timing too because I just released a spicy side story featuring Viktor x Takashi (set in the AU where they actually get together) on my Patreon, like yesterday, and basically, what’s said in the picture literally happen in the spicy side story 
Also, for those who are reading this. I’m curious. What contact name did you guys choose for Yvette? Or maybe you input your own creative name? Please, share them if you’re okay with it
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