Velos (WIP) - Demo Update on 4/30/22

idk why i stopped reading this last time but gods is this so fucking good. im so smitten already with achaius and gods i dont know what sort of crack you put in him but no matter how indifferent and rude he is, im still so drawn to him. dude is basically a rock at this point but i still love him. also the first shy flirt option for him is a masterpiece lmao. my mc is such a sweetheart that even when he calls him a brat when is being mean to him, he’s not angry and just pouty and gods i cant wait to spend more time with him. mans has me on a choke hold. i was expecting i will romance J since they’re a flirt but that first interaction just solidifies my heart for him.

also, i still dont understand what being a whole spawn of diés entails but damn am i intrigued to find out

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This was a great read

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Hello everyone. It’s been a while.

I originally planned to update Velos during the first months of 2022. But life just crashes out of nowhere. I’m not going to rant about it in this post but I just want to explain at least a little bit about my silence.

Anyway, an update will be soon posted.

There is no definite date yet. However, expect it by this month.

I’m in the middle of writing Chapter 3 and hopefully I could finish it for the next update. I have fixed some of the WIP choices and paragraphs in Chapter 1. Additionally, a new stat page might be born (I’m trying to modify stats and their allocations).

I am aware that everything I just announced is ambiguous. But I think it’s important to update you all with how Velos is doing.

Thank you for the patience and support! I’ll post another how’s-it-going update once I have something more to feed you.

:blush:

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I just realized that people have different time zones. By “this month”, I meant April.

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Thank dies for this, i was kinda waiting for the closure of this tread… again :sweat_smile:

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Thank you!!

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Alright, here we go!

When I posted the update announcement, I was aiming for the mid20s of the month. I never would’ve thought that academics and procrastination would force me to delay the update until the last day of April. Wow.

I will be posting the update in a few hours. Just got to tweak some codes and correct some typos. And I still need a complete playthrough from our first testers before making the update public.

See you!

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Demo Update on 4/30/22

  • Current word count is now 115,000 (incl command lines) and 105,000 (excl command lines).

  • Training scenes added in Chapter 2. Naverisse’s route now complete.

  • Location added in the Explore option of Chapter 1.

  • Bomb scene added in the Dorm option of Chapter 1.

  • Lore added in the Dorm option of Chapter 1.

Demo link in the first post.

Contact me for any errors in your playthrough.

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this update was nice. it was definitely a shock to find out about eloin’s situation about being replaced. i was not expecting that.

achaius my beloved :heart_eyes:. still has a tight grip of my neck. although only one route is done, i like it. the whole scene about being asked who you trust and not made me think real hard about the past interactions i had with them.



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Thanks! Fixed.

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It is not possible to get the second bomb from Calleome to prevent the explosion?

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Cool update. Keep it up

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So one, I love this WIP, the setting, the plot, and most importantly for me, the characters chef kiss. I really can’t wait to see where this goes and two What skill checks do you need to beat B in the melee combat scene? I know it’s not really important to the story in the long run but my completionist won’t let me rest until I read the scene

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Surprised there isn’t more comments on this tbh. Maybe there wasn’t that much content before the latest update? I recall playing this before, but had to be ages ago. Probably on initial release.

Dialogue options are diverse and allow for roleplaying of different personalities, characters are great, story is interesting, and I really like the mystery aspect and how doubt is being sowed around who you can trust. Nothing to complain about so far really. Good luck and I’m eagerly waiting for more.

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Thanks for the kind words, everyone.

C will always take it no matter what.

There are two ways to win, have Strength>40 or have Agility>40.

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