Oh, I thought that was intentional, to show that character was really kind of losing the plot, if you know what I mean.
This was amazing! Love it and can’t wait for more!
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I could probably go on for ages gushing about how well the prose works for establishing the tragedy of Kennel’s situation, but I really have to compliment the way that Benny Hawkins is described to the reader. Reading over the story of Cork’s ball and the PE teacher left me with a genuinely emotional reaction by the end of the page line.
Needless to say I’m absolutely hooked by the premise, and I can’t wait to read more!
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