Bugs fixed, just forgot to *set the variables lol
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I think the longest pages are the one with the explanation on craft (the MC explaining it to Rory), and the first fight scene in chapter 2, which starts with: âWithout a second of hesitation, you shoot forward, slamming bodily into them before they can even bring that club back up.â Anyways, Iâm enjoying your story so far :)!
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Cool update, didnât realize itâs been a year since last time
Found some kinda loop bug by the way :
After you leave Sifton and make camp, if you choose to investigate the campfire, then choosing to take the sword instead of getting to the others, and then choosing whichever between aggressive and defensive, at the end of the page, it goes several pages back to the choice of Lyleâs gender.
And even if I go over it all again and make the same choices, it simply loops again
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Strange, Iâll fix that right away. :: fixed
Iâll work on cutting those up a bit. Thanks!
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It actually still does that.
Also it seems like if you investigate the fire, and choose to run back then afterwards the game seems to switch to assuming they had all been with you from the beginning?
Or at least I would assume that MC would give them a serious talking to or confront them on it, but when you set up camp afterwards Rory just says that they should join up with a caravan and that seems to be it.
This is very good. The magic in this world is the most interesting, and the characters are so far really likable. Not Eloi though, i mean, they tried to end the game early by ending us lmao. Iâm curious what youâll do to redeem this poor bastard. I do feel âmaybe weâre not so different after allâ vibes from them.
The random eclipse is a curious novelty despite my annoying brain trying to make sense of it. That bandit leader scene is badass.
So far the calasso is really the best companion, lol. Ditching the pyromaniac siblings was worth it just to have some quality time with this surprisingly cute beast.
Well, Idk if someone has pointed these out before, and honestly Iâm too lazy to look. So here goes anyway.
Thereâs this sentence:
âYou let your lips turn up in an amused smile, leaning back comfortably in your seat. You let your lips turn up in an amused smile, leaning back comfortably in your seat.â
And I also found a bug. Following the option to go continue alone, right after choosing Lyleâs gender (doesnât matter wich) there is kind of a loop where more or less the same scenes are replayed, including the gender selection menu at the end (after choosing here the game continue normally). It doesnât happens when traveling with the siblings.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate them.
I know nothing about astronomy so I havenât got a real reason for the randomness of the eclipse unfortunately.
Iâll fix the double sentence real fast, and try to fix the loop bug again q.q
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I really enjoyed it! I love the vibe of being on a journey and meeting/reuniting wih ros. And the writings really good.
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Against the rules to ask such but last heard yes
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So the authors tumbler is probably the best place to ask and look for this type of stuff. But last i checked there was a pretty big bug that they were stumpted about and was working on back in August
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