I wasn’t even on the stats page 
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That’s not a problem with the demo. Don’t use the saving sistem while on the stats page. What you can only do now is restart.
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no that happens to me as well sometimes the save system bugs and saved one page back from where you are so if you go in to the stats and then go out again and save on a choice or something next time you load you will go to the start page instead has happened to me so many times since i usually check stat increase and stuff like that basically meaning i need to restart the game. (PS this is most likely a problem with the save system as a hole as i have encountered this problem in pretty much every game with the save system)
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Okay. The bug was fixed. Your MC should use the gun and sword at the same time now, thank you for your patience.
I reread thrice but I’m sure you guys know by now how bad I am at looking for typos, so reports are really appreciated.
Also
I’ll be working on the love route for the Wills of the ships and I want to hear everyone’s oppinion regarding Thanatos having a body of a 12 year old. More specifically do you guys want her to stay the way she is or do you want her to be able to change appearance like @Ririsu1 suggested?
In the meantime while waiting for replies I’m gonna go and work on the illustration for chapter four (and probably sone other illustration cuz I’m bored.)
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You could have her stay like that for the most part, and then have her change when they want to do “grown up” stuff in a “grown up” form/body.
Or have her call us a lolicon recalling what Bahamuht told her about their creator.
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The only “grown up” stuff that will happen is kissing though(and holding hands Lol).
I can already see Bahamut’s disappointed look when she saw Thanatos and the MC being lovydovy. 
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If Thanatos does have the mindset of a kid, then to her something like a kiss is considered “grown up” stuff.
I’m just curious as to what type of tsundere Bahamuht’s going to be.
Bruh, if you read all their past you will find out that Thanatos is actually The oldest
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facepalm
Despite reading all of them I can’t believe I keep misremembering all of this.
I guess I’m just focusing too much on Bahamuht, Zena and Olivia(despite being dead) to remember properly.
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Death: Look, give it up. I already spared two characters because of the author’s whim.
I already thought of a romance plot for Bahamut. I’ll just say that she’s longing for something. That’s one down two to go
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I was wondering…can everyone see Bahamut or just the Mc?
Ummm, I don’t understand the question. Can you please rephrase it for me.
For now, only the MC is the only one who can see the ship’s will.
That gives me an idea for a hilarious scene were the MC is kissing a will of a ship and then someone walks into the room to see the MC kissing nothing XD.
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I like Thanatos the way she is. If your not doing anything grown up then I don’t think it’s a problem. A kiss on the cheek, forehead, lips. A hug and the most lewd of things… holding hands…
If you’re not going beyond that then it’s all good I feel.
Plus her looks add to her uniqueness. I feel like changing that would take away from it.
Although if you want to put in the extra work you could just add it as an option for the player to decide.
But that’s just my opinon.
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Me: Choices for the win! Down with plot progression, and cannon anything! Viva la Revolution!
Death: Yeah! I’m tired of having to spare people based on the author’s whims! Death to plot! Death to Tyranny! Death to the Author!
Me: Yeah!.. Wait a minute, you can’t kill the author we need the author for the story!
Death: Death to Dartknight.
Me: well dang…, @Bahamuht I’ll be sure to convey your love to Olivia when I see her.
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I personally don’t think a major change to Thanatos’s appearance is required. Perhaps a few subtle changes, both for a non romance, and Romance only, to indicate her growth since bonding to you. She is the youngest(still older than you technically?), and you are likely the first person she’s bonded to.
During the naval Trinity siblings discussion of my female player character, there were a few instances of them referring to her as a he instead of a she.
There was a tappable scene transition text, where I think you meant to write “Make History”, but instead it reads “Mask History”
Could we have scenes for each ship where the other avatars are present but invisible?
For Thanatos, I’m thinking she passes on a threat Bahamut makes to us, before Leviathan has her reassure us not to take Bahamut seriously, resulting in a scuffle between the three.
For Bahamut, typical insults, followed by excessive bragging. The transition into invisible teasing(that she forgets you can’t hear), ending with a classic tsundere tantrum.
I haven’t thought of anything for Leviathan yet. I’m less familiar with her character archetype.
Tnx I’ll fix them when later when I get home.
There is one scene where you’ll be able to talk to all of them, but that still a long way to go, it’ll be on a special route that needs a password to be unlocked, but it’s still not implemented because the special route is a special ending and the story is far from over.
I never said you’ll never have a chance to speak with Ollivia/Olliver ever again. No need to commit suicide.
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I don’t?
puts dads sword down
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hi keyport love the work your doing its a fantastic story that keep me wanting more. i don’t now if anyone ask but when the MC start fight with Zena she say we are broken and the way our MC fights is this the first time we killed a person. 
anyway thank you and keep up the amazing work 
Dad: I told you to give him the compass or the hat!!
Ollivia: But the sword looks way more cooler!!
Dawn: Keep it down Vivaldi is sleeping. (Behold a not so subtle foreshadowing. Lol)
Zastin/Zena saw something on the MC that’s why they call the MC broken (Hint: Zastin/Zena didn’t mean emotionally or mentally broken, I’m gonna stop here cause I tend to give away huge spoilers and some people don’t want that.
I don’t know if you guys noticed it but a lot of characters in this story is very perceptive. Most of the characters are more than what they look like, you never know, the simple and plain looking guy or our very shy friend might surprise you, Specially in chapter four, cause I’m about to flick a domino and watch the rest fall down, Muahahaha. (Okay that’s enough acting all mysterious in my part.)
I fixed the error on the sibling discussion. As for the other one, I didn’t find anything that says mask history, also I was trying to say Mark history maybe you misread it? Anyway tnx for the report.
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