To Feast on Fear 130k| A Gothic if based on the beast of Gévaudan

I’m soo glad to see you are already invested in the story :sparkles::green_heart:

OMG why I hadn’t seen thisss, I have just watched it and it’s so entertaining, and also has helped my research and gave me some ideas for next chapter lol -Also how dare you now I have the beast’s song playing on loop in my head :rofl:

I’m excited to introduce them already, and we will meet J & C in the next chapter

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If the idea isn’t someone singing French Heads, then I don’t want it LOL. But Puppet History is just fun, as is it’s prototype by the same creator, Ruining History on buzzfeed. Neither is stringently accurate or indepth but it’s hilarious and can get people interested in history and doing their own research.

Oh that’s very soon, I wasn’t expecting that but I am plesantly surprised. Even more excited for the next chapter!

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This song shouldn’t be missing in your playlist, so I’ll leave it here Powerwolf-Beast of Gévaudan :wink:

Your story sounds intriguing. I’ll definitely check it out when i find some time to read for a bit

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I wasn’t expecting it to be this good tho lol so thank you for introducing me to this!

ooooh I love song recommendations thx😁

Please, tell me what you think when you do :wink:

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Usually I don’t read female gender locked stories but omg the writing and plot of this is actually insane :pink_heart:

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Holy crap! I literally just learned about the famous beast a couple of days ago from a YouTube video! Super excited to try this out when I have the time!

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Well, Thank you, that means so much! I’m truly honoured you’re giving it a try even though it’s female locked. So glad the story gripped you :green_heart::sparkles:

Noo way, that’s such an amazing coincidence! It’s a sign! I do hope you have a great time with it. It’s such a wild story, isn’t it?

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Just wanted to chime in as another person who doesn’t normally read female gender-locked games; I really enjoyed this. The start was visceral in so many different ways and I loved how quickly you gave opportunities to characterize the MC so strongly.

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Thank you, for deciding on giving this story a try, I am overjoyed you have liked it as much as I have liked writing it :green_heart::sparkles:

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Holy moly this is fabulous so far! I’m invested after a prologue?! Please keep working on this!

Also, I think it’d be cool if one of the potential ROs also had the curse…but it’s great either way.

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Thank you :green_heart::sparkles:, I certainly will continue too work on this story, as for the curse passing to the RO’s it could be dangerous for them lol

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Alright guys, I have just updated the game, finally after so many time, I know.
I expanded the prologue, with more idk if crude scenes is the right word lol
and for chapter one we meet some interesting new characters as well… so, let me know what u think :wink::green_heart:

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As A Person Who Doesn’t Play Gender locked Female Games normally I really Liked this, The Atmosphere, the characters, Everything is just so good, please continue the Great work Author.

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I’m still chewing through the demo but you did an Amazing job with this IF. The characters are interesting and I love the options for MC characterization.

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You write haunting just right, since I read the prologue originally when you first posted this I remember not being able to get this IF out of my head. But now my expectations have certainly been surpassed. I’m really loving the mind bending and brain breaking experience the MC is going through.

I did want to confirm about when we would be selecting the gender for the selectable romance interest. As I noticed Josephine (female version of love interest of our rival family) there were quite a few mix uses of pronouns in her scenes which did make me confused at the first encounter at mass thinking I was meant to select their gender.

But a lovely continuation to this story and I’m excited to read more.

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Are there other “werewolves” or monsters besides us and can we romance them?

EDIT: Also, completely unrelated (I haven’t finished the current story) but if my character were to marry the duke (forgot his name - the old man with 3 dead wives), she would arrange an accident for him. He’s an old man, it wouldn’t be far fetched to assume the excitement of the nuptial night was too much for his heart… wink wink Boom. Rich widow.

It would be ironic for the man who collects dead wives to end up on the receiving end.

EDIT 2: Also the game is constantly going back and forth between treating Joseph(ine) as either man or woman. Sometimes it’s “he” sometimes it’s “she”.

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Aw thank you :green_heart::sparkles: I did tried my best to polish my writing, as the setting required it and at the same time, I’m really enjoying the torment, the agony, the horrible implications the “curse” has brought into MC’s life.

Yep, I got confused with the variables I had set for J, I’m already working on the fix-update, sorry for the confusion guys :sweat_smile:

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Wellllllll in the world I have made, yeah, there are, but the only “monster” we can romance, in this story is a ghost, that will basically at first believe we are the reincarnation of his long lost love, Sylvaine, she is related to MC, and the one who cast the curse, and ironically MC happens to resemble her a bit too much

Yknow, I have thought on that as well, and it’s quite tempting to let you guys become a widower lol, like yeah the night pf the marriage consummation, MC transforms briefly and his heart can’t handle it, as he throws a fit calling MC a demon or witch​:thinking:

I’m working on fixing that

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