The Outsider WIP (July 23, 2018 minor update) Important Poll on #441!

I really like the suggestion. I think a idea for the rebel is already forming in my mind.

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The rebel is the most favoured character in a story more so then the hero.

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Should the rebel be the most badass member of the team? Like for example, the rebel will do something insane that even the MC would not do?

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The rebel generaly makes more brash choices then the hero running off into battle with no strategy or if the leader rushes off to battle out of heroism the rebel will interject and question the decision of the leader but will participate anyway. Yes the rebel is more badass the the rest.

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If the rebel makes a mistake the hero is the only one that can save the rebel. If the hero makes a mistake the rebel is the first to save and meet the hero then the team.

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If you need examples I will gladly list rebel character’s in contemporary animation or stories

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I would appreciate that, any help would be welcome since I’m technically a noob when it comes to this but I want to give this my best try so the readers can enjoy it.

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Avatar the last airbender: Zuko, Dragon ball z: vegeta, fairy tail: gray fullbuster, hunger games: peta, Soul eater: Soul Evans. These are the most I can name based on my contemporary knowledge.

Oh I love Vegeta from Dragon Ball Z. Funny thing is that DBZ is one of the three inspirations for this story. Yeah, I get what to do now, it seems a bit easier to figure out the rebel now.

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In what year would game take place of you dont mind me asking

Glad to be of service. Remember the simpler ideas work the best then an overloaded story.
P.S Batman is also a rebel.

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It will take place in the modern times so 2018. Thinking about starting the MC’s childhood during the early or mid 90’s.

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That’s true but Enju is already inspired by Batman and Iron Man so she’ll be the brains and eventual second in command when the MC begins to lead the team.

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Remember the five man band is not a finite concept so traits are interchangeable. It is possible for the brawn to be the brain or the leader to be the heart. Be warned this only works well if their are less then five characters.

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Thank you for the help you gave me so far. I’ll make sure to keep your advice in mind when I begin writing the basic plot outline and work from there.

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Your welcome, remember the simpler the better you have to crawl before you can jump.

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Couldn’t had said it better myself! Thankfully I have plenty of free time on my hands since I am disabled (completely deaf) so I should be able to devote my energy whenever it is possible. I want to take my time to make this story a real good one so it may be a long time until I’m able to bring the demo to you guys.

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Wait im superman?
I love it although i prefer flash

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More like a mix of Superman and Dragon Ball Z’s Goku

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This game is cool.

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