The problem was them using religious beliefs to justify being assholes and attacking people of different religions, races, sexuality etc. It’s part of the reason a MC of that background has to process and decide how they’re going to handle going forward with a certain attitude towards their magic. Because of the hatred and bigotry the neighbors who found out about their powers would express. Sometimes in the form of violence.
Makes sense. It read a bit like the issue was religion vs. secularism, rather than their behavior.
There’s a Discord page now for anyone interested.
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The remade scene of meeting Jabernath is now up, tailored to each character background.
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I made a rough sketch of Nellis Island for my reference moving forward and I decided to share it with you guys too.
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Is it dorm B9 or dorm D9?
Try “along the way figuring out” instead of “along the way on figuring out”
Ok. The thing about how I initially imagined that scene is that Ilsa would lead the MC close to the row of dorms and due to coming back from the Garden/Cemetery the closest they’d be to would be Dorm D9 and thus she would just use it as an example while also saying what her own dorm is. However, as I was finishing the island tour scene I realized that doesn’t come across and so I have changed it to B9 to just place the example and location as her dorm. This was also before I mapped out the island and I realize the closest dorm they’d be to by that logic anyway would be D12.
Thank you, I’m not sure how I missed that typo. I’m very glad you caught it.
Also, I am mini updating with I have finished the island tour scene with Ilsa for both splits of the 3 backgrounds.
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Got a game ending bug in the scene right after my mortician’s kid got confronted for his attitude.
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Could you post the error message, please? Also, I just really like the way you phrased that. 
I can’t get past the meeting with the headmaster. He tells me my dorm and then I can’t continue
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There is a Problem in the game.Whenever I click on the Next button when Jabernath tells me that my luggage has been carried off and sends me to my room,dashindon.com says: line 1288: Invalid string, open quote with no close quote:") and (Acceptance < 50). Please solve this issue so I can play the whole game you have updated.I really liked the game after reading to this point.I have to continue and play the game.Please help!
I am having the same problem dude!
Alright everyone, I fixed the coding error that popped up on line 1288. It should be good to go now.
I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far and I hope this correction now lets you play the game in full.
Thank you so much for solving this issue and for providing a nice game too!
Thank you and you’re welcome. 
Hello, I really enjoyed the part I hace been able to play, and I find the writting pretty good. But just after the conv with the headmaster I can’t pass that scene
If you can fix it it would be grate, as I’m pretty hyped to continue the demo from what I have read in the coments
Thanks, both for your enjoyment and catching that.
@TheAnalyst Hello, I really liked the concept of your game and I wish you the best for the future, I hope it doesn’t take long to finish as I am very eager to play it! 
Hey, thank you so much. It will certainly take time, but by keeping on track with my new writing schedule it will certainly be completed. I appreciate the support.
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