The Lost Bride Patreon Update - Chapter 5 part 1 (294k Demo- April 15/ 2026)

Really enjoyed this. I appreciated that we could love Johnathan platonically if we aren’t romantically interested in him. If we don’t eventually get Lord William’s love though I’m gonna riot.

A few times female Dracula’s pronouns got switched:

She doesn’t look like anyone from this town, doesn’t even seem like he’s from England at all.

The Countess estimates it may take approximately a month to settle everything to his satisfaction.

Her tongue traced her lower lip, feeling the sharp points of his fangs beginning to extend as the sun sank lower and lower.

I pause in my writing, then use my pen to sketch his appearance.

I try to capture the sharp angles of her face, the line of her nose, the curve of her lips, the way his dark hair fell across her pale skin, and her deep black eyes.

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:blush: yay

You gonna have your wish in a week or 2 lol

Oh, is it not open to you? You can read it by just using the game link.

Oh, yes you can! You can marry him in chapter 4 and explaining to him that you are not into men. He’ll be sad (crying even but hey he been through a lot!) but he’ll be happy to support you.

Oh I would love to answer this but spoilers lol

Once chapter 3 is fully done, I plan to add more scenes and choices to both chapter 1 and 2. Was planning to add more stuff to the MC too and fix the stat screen.

That is one of the paths you can take btw lol. So yeah, it is not just a tumblr thingy. You can do it in game.

:sob: Kitty is hard to win but it can be done!

OMG!! I was pretty sure I got them all! :sob: :sob:

Will fix them, ty! :heart: Oh I think I know why that, cuz I swear I did fix all of them! I uploaded the old chapter 2. :woman_facepalming:t2:

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Dear Printesa,I really appreciate your awesome work! Can’t wait to see more content.

It’s the first time I have made comments on COG forum because The Lost Bride is the best game I have ever played this year so I can’t help praising your brilliant ideas.Besides,it has also sparked my interest in Dracula and I hope I will read through it one day.(Sorry for all the grammar mistakes I make)

All in all, a marvelous game!Please keep writing.:saluting_face:

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Thank you for taking the time to reply!

I am now like 99% sure that at least one of the suitors is gay and we can organise a mutually bearded marriage for L with them (got a feeling it’s either the doctor or the Texan (probs the doctor what with how L said she feels like she can be herself around them.))
Either that or one of them is already in a relationship with a woman and isn’t really interested in L, they just can’t get with the one they love officially and publicly and as such have to marry someone of “good blood” and is fine with it being a bearded/fake marriage (the Noble suitor ofc being the one in this situation.)

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As soon as the calendar hits October I start to crave gothic media. I try to avoid WIPs where I can but this premise was just too good, I am so grateful I gave this a chance. Your writing is so charming and the horror is quite well done. Will be keeping an eye on this one. It feels too early in the story for me to offer much feedback beyond: this is great and I’m having a good time.

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Welcome back!!! I still remember the old demo of this IF, I was hoping that you’d continue working on it.

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she kinda looks familiar… :thinking:

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Looks close to Elle Fanning lol She is kinda close to how I see Lucy in my head. No canon looks tho! So everyone can see her however they like. The art is just for fun.

:heart: Ty!! There will be a public update this month! Once patreon is updated, I’ll have part 1 out.

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Yeah, Elle Fanning really looks like a Lucy. :grin:

By the way, I love your work! I always check the forum hoping to see your latest demo updates. :hand_with_index_finger_and_thumb_crossed:

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I read the update on the Pat and maaaan this story just keeps getting better and better every update! And you know you’re down bad for an IF when you’re making memes like this

or this

Who gon stop me?!

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Lolol I love these and I’m saving them! :rofl: so true hehe

Pls, don’t stop!!!

Lemme steal them and post them on tumblr.

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SPOILERS GENERALLY AND FOR JONATHON’S SIDE POV STORY!

tw/cw warning for sa mentioned not in detail

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I feel so terrible for Jonathon he got SA’d, harassed and then witnessed a murder. Also just general Drac treatment. I wish badly for his safety and his reuniting w mc, especially when the mc is fully romancing him. How do you start to heal? Most definitely doesn’t start at Drac’s place. That poor man I can’t imagine, what he’s gone/going through is despicable. I’m already attached like if they don’t leave that man alone! Don’t think you need to be attached per-say to feel for him though, it’s just wrong point blank. Drac is really clinging to mc bad, idk if they just look really similar to someone in their past, mc is the person they knew reincarnated… it hit Drac hard, they spun out. Partner romantic interest…Much to ponder! Is there an aspect of mc died early in their past life, some Juliet tragic stuff?:thinking:

sorry if this speculation already has answers and you’ve made anything cannon and I just haven’t caught it aswell, because that’s a possibility. Not expecting answers straight off the bat (unintentional pun here :-1:t3::tomato::tomato:) just general thoughts!

I wonder how much it’s about mcs blood, and or if this is a thing of I want you so your blood is more enticing, and or if there’s an aspect like mc has got something/is something even special that makes their blood more enticing generally to vamps n maybe other blood drinkers. :thinking:

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:sob: Omg, I feel so bad writing his scenes!!

I really can’t wait for this. He will be a changed man from what you saw in the flashback. And you can help him with healing if your mc wants.

Here art that I done of him and MC of a scene from chapter 4. (Very very early wip)

So, the MC looks 100% like their beloved, and she has the same voice as their beloved.

Drac had done smth in the past. And this is the reason for it. Won’t say rn tho cuz spoilers!

There is a reason why you’re connected to Dracula even by touch and smell, why your blood is more enticing, and why you can see some of their beloved dreams or memories.

You will be able to break that connection tho

Omg! Ty so much! :heart: :sob:

I wish lol (One day!)

I did write some fanfics. And reading period books does help a lot!

I’m still learning tho!

:eyes: Ohh, this is simply amazing lol! Will steal it, gimme! :folded_hands:t2:

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Your writing style is remarkable. Are you secretly a published author? Genuinely the best writing I’ve read from all the WIPs.

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disgusting

I animated dis!

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SPOILERS FROM PROLOGUE TO CHAPTER 2 AND FOR JONATHON’S SIDE POV STORY!

New to posting on the forum so I do apologise if I do something wrong/shouldn’t be doing. I read the rules but I don’t doubt I could be making a mistake/not conducting myself and my use of the forum well. I’m open to delete edit put elsewhere etc where necessary, I appreciate any grace if one does give it.

It’s nice to hear from you, I appreciate you expanding/elaborating and of course thank you for sharing your work! :slight_smile:

These are my thoughts/curiosities/process so far, I thought it might be helpful to see how a reader even if just one is taking in the story, what’s effective what’s come across and also this is something I enjoy doing so I included my understanding so far and I could definitely be wrong or missed something, also don’t mean to somehow act like I’m telling author what they or others already know like I’m retelling the story and rewriting what you write. I hope this is okay and I managed to be helpful/nice some way!

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My thoughts here! LONG

I was gonna say there were mentions throughout about an odd comfort/familiarity/draw to who mc’s been seeing.

(idk if it’s not really a thing unless u pick the options directly mentioning it or it still is MCs just not realising it/grasping clarity fully understandably because that’s a scary experience to go through? Without being religious or having some spiritual belief though I think either mc would still be shaken, it’s just full on skepticism vs instinct n trusting yourself without a nugget of belief already. Not completely sure how religious beliefs/how much of that is pickable by the player but so far there’s two depicted, take out your cross and point it to the sky begone! Or there is no way, I must be loosing it. Which I really appreciate, course you can probably dabble in both option wise for your mc?)

One example is, on the train ‘a familiar cold’ (vampires being dead probably would be chilly to the touch but maybe Drac if he was turned and tended to be cold before? Idk abt vampires having kids was cold to the touch/cold blooded too?) to where it’s oddly comforting is mentioned, the pull towards what probably is Drac is solidified quick (atleast imo as a reader personally) and my thoughts where it’s either the specific connection they share OR probably Drac has some power/ability like mind control, hypnosis etc. Because that’s a known thing/ability common with vampires in fiction, it’d make sense but it also could be both (connection + powers) at play when it comes to mc.

(A lot of this I wrote when I’d only played till getting off the train and added bits in over a few days finishing chapter so sorry if things are a bit all over the place, this is just showing my throught process and experience with the game!)

He said, rough translation.

“come closer, outside”

Which idk if they have to verbalise like how in some supernatural fiction/media there’s spells you have to say to make it happen/call it, not all spells silent. But this adds to it. I’ve seen a time where one character could do it all silent but that wasn’t regular or was rare/high level or skill necessary and idk how regular such a specific quirk/mc point appears-

Another likely example of Drac’s ability to manipulate the mind, ‘compelling’ influencing, powerful pushes/suggestions outside of Drac getting us out the house is how when we end up outside of Lucy’s place and we see Drac we feel ourselves ‘unable to look away’. Lucy calls our name several times.

The selectable option we get

“I find myself transfixed at the sight, wanting to reach for it” outside lends itself to what I’ve spoke of, but as always it can also just be their bond or both powers + bond; how/the moment Lucy ’sleepwalks’ is an e.g./supports as-well.

ontop of mc having nightmares/dreams or memories because they share them/their connection allows/has that effect if im understanding correctly, I also wouldn’t be surprised if Drac had the ability to manipulate dreams or if maybe mc’s subconscious knows something’s up and their presence or ‘watching’ is causing some reaction in the system. Sleep? Not easy when you feel like someone’s literally watching/surveilling you. Drac could be trying to get mc to remember something, introduce themselves, lead mc away somewhere, waiting for a good moment or just push a narrative. A Mixture perhaps.

Mc being pulled out the house at the beginning is a key example on Drac’s influence/their relationship. Drac seems to want to get MCs attention, pulling mc out the house not literally physically but definitely that’s what happened, knocking on the train window, whispering, literally pressing their fangs into MCs neck when they get up, more blatantly picking up their hat and giving it to the mc to talk to them which is less sneaky but still looking for something, testing, playing a game, etc. Drac could (it’s likely the case) be treating mc like a fish in a fishbowl. Going off Drac and those 3 I’ve got no good name to refer to them as really, black moulds the band, the moulds, mould clan? mould troupe?…maybe that’s a wip lol (I understand that’s not cannon, I just want to be petty cause i feel it’s the least I can do atm :face_with_steam_from_nose:. Trust and believe they will get smighted, more then that. They’re gonna have to create a new word.) they like to play with their ‘food’ so to speak. Power play. Drac is like the bully with a crush trope turned 1000% plus they’ve cooked for years and years, idk if it’s partially/or just feeding into it or largely because of the excitement disbelief and craze of seeing mc again. Being so worked up thrilled desperate they’re taking pleasure in seeing their influence/mc bothered because it means she’s real and she feels it, something is still there, something that can’t be taken? That they can tug on their bond and there’ll be a reaction/feedback. The whispering/talking could be not apart of that and they’re just so excited they’re talking to themselves dialoguing, a ‘finally I see you again’. Honestly could be narrating like they’re in a doll house playing looking in, the bigger entity looming in, and have got dolls and a ‘favourite’ doll. Immortal ego/superiority where they’re like look at this cute human take a shower and get ready for work.

Possibly an issue of assuming familiarity like Drac could think/feel n act like they can just continue from where they left off or it’s just a detour/has been one and they can redirect and come together and be together again like a movie. Likely Drac only cares about mcs comfort aslong as it doesn’t effect Drac’s goals/wants. A controlling thing, condescending because you’re not respecting the individuals autonomy they’re already like well I already figured everything out this is how it’s meant to be I don’t even need to question. Might even not care at all. It’s very scary that’s an understatement probably. The dynamic like a cat affectionately playing with a mouse, but that’s tormenting as a mouse especially when you don’t know that cat at all-

—One thing a crazed lover/ex lover or ‘admirer’ is probably gonna have is a confirmation bias lol. A lot of what he was whispering translated pretty much confirms a lot of that but even without understanding what Drac’s saying you get the idea I feel anyway. Probably would’ve come to that same conclusion without, though Jonathons pov helps with getting more of Drac’s character and one could argue how you’d more likely get there.

Rough translation of some lines being and generally lines that support my thoughts

“You’re finally coming back to me where you belong.”

“How I missed your sweet voice and tender touch.”

‘They’re gonna know and get it when I send them an anonymous/largely dubious letter confessing my love and how I’m watching so closely because I care’ type, maybe that was a younger version of Drac or one that’s still relevant with mindset etc. Some sick (not in a good way) ooo come and find me, when will you figure it out, I want to see you suprised you’ll always come to me thinking they’re real romantic and they consider it dreamy and or it’s just self serving that they have fun with, dehumanising really. wouldn’t be that surprised if they have a bit of pandemic with that, any creature with a decent life span longer then the average humans really. Vampires i feel like would probably be big in that game tho :sob:

With pressing their fangs idk if they were getting overzealous and were hyped and decided no we have to savour and wait I can’t jump the gun , or just a playing indulgent thing again. Based off what Drac was saying, their origins are either in Romania or Romania related, some population who lived elsewhere who speak Romanian kinda like how more then just French ppl in France speak/mainly atleast partially speak French? Be it Canada or countries and or /communities in Africa? Or it could be one of the languages they’ve picked up on, having a lot of time you’d probably do a lot of travel or get real bored and decide to take something else up. Like learning a language either due to boredom or plans n so on. I feel especially with so much time in their belt, the language usage really matters not that it doesn’t as a mortal it definitely does, but with such a large amount of time alive/available it’s an extra layer of telling/lore there. Be it what Drac was born speaking before being turned, just spent a lot of formative/self building years/time however many years (maybe Drac just got into speaking Romanian the past year, it could say something about his age too I know some languages are older then others?) back around a place, in a country, in a community, certain ppl that’s left an impact,

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I’m loving this story. I usually don’t play games that are gender locked but this looked too good not to play it and i’m happy i did!

Also, i wanted to report a small error. When i choose brown hair the description on the game menu says that i have blonde hair instead of brown.

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Thank you, will be fixed once the game update. :blush:

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Progress update.

Just showing yall what I been working on. The demo has gone up from 65k to now 118k

Chapter 3 is around 53k now and I’m still not done lol, kill me :sob:

Fingers crossed that it is done this month.

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Woo-hoo! Really excited for this!

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