Techblade of the Mage (Overpowered magitek servant fantasy; WiP, 32K words, updated 22 March 2025)

Update was good but not enough options.

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I assume since the Prince is gender fluid and reacting to the attack/looks exactly like the woman, the succubus was him when he was in his female form.

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I really, really like Talenta and how Zara acts like a middle-aged man in a reckless young lady’s body. She’s a very interesting character and I’m glad out of all people our golem is bound to her lol. Can’t wait to properly meet Salome :point_right: :point_left: Him keeping the dandelion we gave her!!! omg sob… the masochist is a softie

Also yess! Thank you for the maid dress! The details of the outfit section made me super happy

Another step towards Peak Maid Golem

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Understood. Hopefully I can do better in the future.

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Mhmm, such a good story, I was sad when the WIP ended lol. The characters and lore are really great, the RO’s for our lady and us are interesting. And what is the prince hiding? Was he the one fighting against us? And if yes, why? Is he one of the rebels or the master of them?
I’m looking forward to more :heart:

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Hmm the prince is sus, but I like sus, smirk…

I like it when choosing armament and clothing in Chapter 3 hope we can use it later.

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Chesty Puller slaying demons and having the capital being named after Houston, Texas.

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ngl this is really good :))

Good stuff. I’m glad you went with the trait system, it’s much more fun this way. I hope our creator doesn’t mass produce us, the world can’t handle a sarcastic superman army.

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Looking forward to this story to complete and release. :fire::fire::fire:

I love the sarcastic trait. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Satomi: Are you human?
MC: I am cat. Meow.

:rofl: Specially funny cause I imagine my golem is still mostly deadpan and straight-faced when he delivers these lines. :rofl:

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intresting like it

this one is weird in A kiss from death kind of way… our ward really ask the real question though do you have that function ?

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I LOVE this! Keeping this tracked! Love it lots!

Well if you’re equipped with quantum vacuum cleaner probably could make it breathless :joy:

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Added 1.5k flashback of Salome lore as an interlude before the next chapter.

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Anybody else just want to nuke a castle in this game?

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Do you guys think the golem(you/me) is stronger than our creator

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Creation will surpass the creator. :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

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Maybe we could rebel against our creator and do whatever we want instead of guarding and protecting that noble girl.

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