I took a break from IFs for a while (mostly bc I just already read everything I found worth reading) so imagine my delight finding this absolute gem or a WIP! Absolutely loving the concept, great fun with high stakes. I was super invested and read it in one go.
Usually set characters are not my preference and I often don’t stick with them, but I really vibe with this mc (admittingly this might be because he reminds me of my male V from Cyberpunk and I did give him an unexisting hair colour option (high contrast salt & pepper gray hair in my mind while still looking very young, though that happened more than that I actively decided on it)
Was I grossed out by the roaches? Were the sad clothes confrontational? Yes, but it brought me into his mindset and the situation he is in as the son of an uncaring mob boss. The limited expectations he has for his future and the gaping contrast with Paul. It worked for me, and I was glad to see that during the game you can improve his life by breaking the cycle little by little (or stay there and make it worse if you so choose) I enjoyed, for instance, that while not being the greatest fan of Paul’s prissy style, he could work a good suit to his advantage/better impression for the record deal and look good while doing it.
My mc is envious of Paul’s life, of the love of their mother he can never receive, but he doesn’t blame Paul. He messes with him in good fun but has his back when it counts and I’m super curious if this ends in betrayal or no! (and from whose side, if not both)
For the romances, all of them aside from Seb (atm, maybe that will change when I play his route) are interesting to me for different reasons, which I think is a pretty cool feat.
I do think Rupert is very feminine coded and it occasionally throws me out of the immersion (yes he’s soft boi but my mind does picture him as Prue almost as much as Rue, which is not really supposed to happen, I think. It could do with a bit more distinction in my eyes. I very much love their story/soulmate route and I think that will be my main though Rue is a tad bit young for my taste (but that’s not a critique) It’s also fun to have other characters really yearn for mc but holding back and not just the other way around! I’m also looking forward to the drama of MC no longer healing sufficiently/getting seriously injured and the pain that will cause his RO’s but especially Rue.
I haven’t played the others’ routes yet bc I only found this wip yesterday night, but I’ll come back to them once I do.
Mark interests me as an experiment and an age gap I can actually see happen situation wise, and I’m going to pursue it out of a sense of morbid curiosity where my MC does not aspire to improve his life because he does not believe it can happen. I’m very appreciative of having this option!
Sieun I like very much as a character, and I’m curious about his story but not as sure yet what their endgame will be like.
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Seb feels a tad bland for me still, I don’t feel as connected to this character as with the others, maybe some more memories/throwbacks with him or carving out his character a little bit sharper.
‘Heat pooling in stomach’ is more of a feminine descriptor of the experience of arousal, but not so much a man’s. It felt out of place.
Also: Oh Ernest, how I dream of your demise.
And Barbara, how much I want you to meet and hold your other son.
Really looking forward to the development of this game and the future updates. it’s already really good to me!