I still got the same error as others when I tried to choose decline
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Oh dear…
Hmm, i just adjusted it. Try again if you could
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It works perfectly now! Thank you!
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#You hate it, that softness, that kindness—it felt so wrong
#Tears gather at your eyes but none are shed
#You look at him with pure hate
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#You pull away
#You leaned into the touch
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#What can’t get enough of me?" you smirk, leaning against the door.
#“Do I have a choice?” you laugh, already stepping out.
#“That would be nice,” you smile at the duo.
#“No thank you,” you duck your head, already closing the door
#“Go away,” you hissed at them, glaring.
#“Are foxes gonna be there?” You ask casually.
#“Think we’ll find a fox?” You muse.
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Check that the tenses used in the choices are consistent.
Some may even find your penchant to use words to be ‘a coward’s choice’, particularly older and/ traditional ones.
I’m guessing the / isn’t supposed to be there.
You are ready to meet to chief
the
Soon, he was banished from the clan, tgough he was allowed to take whatever belongings he needed.
though
Cause I’m the one who’ll hurt you all,’ you think, but let yoursekf be moved
yourself
Suddenly, the beastkin bites into the animal’s neck, tearing away a chunck of flesh.
chunk
You’re a beaskin, though you don’t know the protagonist’s exact origins, she should be used to blood.
beastkin
#…quite admireable
admirable
#You wanted to see what would happen
You read my mind completely 
It’s a pretty interesting read, and I do like the artic tribe setting. Even if it’s all just a game.
Good luck.
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Hi there!
Thanks for reading and finding all the errors lol. Just as i finished the rest of chapter 2—aka the ‘smart’ option lol.
Yeah, tenses are my pitfall
But I’m glad you find it interesting!
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Opening of chap 3 posted! Which is about the aftermatch of chap2 choice
I hope i hit the emotional beats right
Enjoy!
(Oh and i finally decided to change this forum’s category—yay!)
Edit: new cover too
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nice
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Thanks lol
Completely unrelated but I love your pfp
I this, this is good. Has about the right amount of torturing the MC, don’t really have anything else to say
Other than shouldn’t it be simply existing instead of simple existing?
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Oops yeah lol. Thank for catching that
Also glad you like it. Hopefully the next chapter will calm down, relatively speaking or it’ll become worse
Just finished playing and I really like it so far!
I like that sort of isekai, though seeing what happens if you try to defy the original plot makes me worry for my kind MC…
Afterwards I was trying the choice to just ask Leif and am happy the outcome was far gentler than I worried. Glad savescumming is possible here lol.
Also Leif is so sweet.
Looking forward to more!
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Hey there! Firstly, thanks for your thoughts. Haven’t got much feedback on that aspect so really appreciate it
Fate is a strict mistress lol but she’s not opposed to workarounds. So long as the pc has particular stats, it should be possible.
Also, not all quest fail/ decline has penalty
And yeah, i had so much fun writing that scene ngl! First branch i did even. Also what’s savescumming? /gen q
Yes, Leif is a sweetheart 
Glad you like him
Thanks for playing and taking the time to comment too!
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Since this is a demo I can save before I make a choice and if I don’t like it, I can load back before I made that choice. That’s savescumming. At least that’s what I think it is called lol
About your blurry message (I’m not commenting much on the forum so I always forget how to do that myself) I’m glad to hear that!
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Really like the concept for the game as well as the quests to hurt Leif and the penalties that follow. I didn’t expect the first penalty to be that severe. I did get this bug when I chose to decline the first quest as a bunny.
I think if you just replace the erikka_limbs variable with the erikka_limbloss you created in the startup.txt the bug should go away
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Firstly, thanks you! And im glad(?) it surprised you. Someone commented (I’m gonna paraphrase) that the game feels like you’re constantly moments away from unravelling/ disaster
And yeah, thanks for catching that! That was actually the original variable’s name but i decided to change it cause of something that’ll happen in chap 3
Also, wait, do you mean first penalty as in for the first quest or for the first option?
Oh and files have been updated!
Sorry about that, I meant the first penalty as in what happens when you choose to decline the first quest about the scarring
Ahh, i see i see
Quick lil sketches of Leif and Sigurd. Honestly it was both fun and difficult coming up with how to design/ portray them
Plus my style is kinda cutesy which doesn’t really suit Sigurd as much as Leif lol
Of course, y’all are free to interpret/ imagine the characters how you wish.
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I like the art. 
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