I definitely had fun reading through this! I was impressed by how extensive the customisation was, and I can’t remember the last IF I played where picking a career felt like it had a real impact in the narrative. Some of the more random and goofy dialogue options struck me as kind of out there, but I also never felt like I was forced towards picking them and the narrative respected my choice to play things more or less straight; if there’s space for both sides of that coin, then great!
On which note, it was fun to mostly respond to texts via “ok”, “thanks” and [left on read].
The sound effects weren’t my cup of tea, and I reset in order to turn them off on pretty much the second screen, but tbh I really, really dislike fly noises in particular so it was a snap decision.
The zalgo sometimes got to be a little too much during the very interface-screwy moments; it felt like maybe one step too far, in terms of escalating tension?
I’m not sure how I felt about the section towards the end of the demo which prompts you to reconfirm how you feel about Adrian/Merlin and whether you’re putting on a front. I can understand perhaps shifting from “Adrian’s my pal” to “I’m crushing on Adrian” or vice versa, but having so many options, including “Actually he’s a stalker!” from back at the start, and the framing took me out of it - I went from focusing on the story to thinking very mechanically, moreso with the two-faced stuff. However, I gotta acknowledge that I’m not sure how you’d go about positioning that in a more organic way, I just struggled a bit to reconcile how I could really say actually, I was lying all this time when the narrative has been in my head so much.
I glanced at the Serial Killer and Imposter secrets without actually picking them, cause I was curious, and along with Inhuman, my true selection, they all felt very compelling. Great job.
My end of run stats:
Magic : 10 Physical : 32 Intelligence : 27 Charisma : 20
Bold : 66 Sweet : 111 Sassy : -40 Optimist : 62
Health(at Climax) : 54 Health(Final) : 100 Wound : healed Serious Injuries : 2
Caution : 16 Will : 4 Apathy : 0 Purity : 2 Cloudcuckoolanderness : 2 Denial : 1 Coward : 0 Silent : 16 Mute : false Pottymouth : 4 Intimidation : 28
Arthurian Lore : 2 Serenades : 0 Interpretive Dances : 0 Crimes : 0 Known Crimes : 0 Reject the Call : 0 Ward Status : 6 Lore Dump : 0 Lore Dodge : 0
Tech : 10 Medical : 50 Internet : 0 Criminal : 0 Botany : 30
Club : polo Job : paramedic Hobby : garden Talent : tactics Using Pseudonym? : false Pet : None Dibs : None
Childhood : abuse Secret : inhuman Crazy Theory : None Crazy Theory Level : 0 Two-Faced : False
Vice : wrath Addiction : smoking Fear : closed Fear Level (at Climax) : 18 Corruption : 1 Mindcontrol : false
Random Appearance: false Attractiveness Level : 1 Striking : 2 Body Type: 1 Height: short Best Feature: eyes
Tattoos : 0 Striking Tattoos : false Scars : 2 Striking Scars : true Piercings : 1 Striking Piercings : false
Striking Clothes : false Heavy Clothes : false Long Clothes : false Flashy Mask : false Haircolor Striking : false Eyecolor Striking : false
Merlin Affinity : 54 Merlin Flirt : 40 Merlin Bond : 3 Merlin Gender : female
Adrian Affinity : 76 Adrian Flirt : 0 Adrian Past Bond : 0 Adrian Current Bond : 2
Weapons : polo mallet
Inventory : Audrey III & herb garden | wardrobe | picture of foster family | Magic 8 Ball | pearls of protection | Arthurian Lore guide |
Achievements : Insomnia | Nepenthes | One Small Step…
(is this the most seriousface MC so far? I’m a little proud of myself)


