The story is well written and I liked how much lore you put into this world you created (2075 feel so faraway and I like to immagine what this far future would be like and your sci-fi rendition is quite interesting)
I Highly recommend this to everyone. Even genderlocked I feel the main character Rio Ramirez is given enough personality and characteristics to choose from to make it a likeable young protagonist which story in the future I will like to follow. As much as I liked his fellow students (Fallen in love with April & Estelle characters), the teachers (Dove & Calamity and that cool Alley Cat ) and also the ābackgroundā heroes side characters (Totally added my vote in the poll for Dino at the end and I feel like in some way while keeping his own originality it was given a tribute to a fellow hosted game series: Community college ;-).
In any case canāt wait for the sequel. 10/10 a good experience
keep up the good work
Iām attracted to all characters with bodily powers, environmental powers, and elemental powers. It does not matter if they are main, secondary or tertiary characters. They all liked me their powers are great.
I liked the superheroes that I no longer remember their name but I tell you that I liked April, North, the dinosaur boy, that Canadian tiger man, that ice man from the bogatyrs and those heroes of the European league: the skeleton man and the glass man .
I like them for personal reasons; I was bullied for 9 years at school for being a different person in many things. And I felt segregated and only having my family with me as emotional support but at the same time I felt a disconnection with the rest of the world; At that time I felt contempt towards people like them and felt that I was better than them because they basically made fun of me, envying the virtues I had and in real life I had the same fears as April of turning bad due to my condition of discrimination and psychological and physical abuse. . If hiding your animal form or your bodily alteration is in animal powers, I identify with them since at that time I had to become a reserved person as a form of defense and disguise my personality so as not to feel vulnerable in front of others. Por lo tanto si conociera a uno de estos individuos tendrĆa mucha empatĆa por ellos
I see, Iām sorry you had to go through so much. I can relate to Corporal augmented as well as I have been bullied for a medical condition I was born with. I have extreme farsightedness and have always worn glasses with very thick lenses, which made me a prime target for bullying.
Well, if there is the possibility of a continuation or spin off of this universe, it would be good if it were longer, for the enjoyment of more people, a minimum of 200 thousand words. Itās a suggestion if you like, because I really liked the novel. Greetings from Mexico.
Another thing that I think is important to comment is that Rio is from Ecuador, right? and in Ecuador they speak Spanish. Iām sorry to tell you that in the Spanish language Rio is not a non-binary name, it is a masculine name. The only non-binary name of Spanish origin that I know is Sam as a diminutive of the names Samuel (Male) and Samantha (Female) or Fer of Fernando (Man) or Fernanda (Woman)
I am from Spain and Rio as name can be used by everyone I know Several Maria Rio. Or del Rio. Anyway, names donāt have to be gendered and arenāt as gendered as people believe. In my country nowadays names are legal without gender. I can be a Man called Susan or any other combination. I really encourage people to think beyond patriarchal name convention
and that cool Alley Cat 
) and also the ābackgroundā heroes side characters (Totally added my vote in the poll for Dino at the end and I feel like in some way while keeping his own originality it was given a tribute to a fellow hosted game series: Community college ;-).
Here we speak from victim to victim.