Lost in your eyes (WIP) [February 4 2026 Update] [6 Ch, 260K words] [Vampires/Romance/Modern Dark Fantasy]

Valentine is actually messed up because of Jinwa. To him, Valentine isn’t someone to care but someone to use, and Jinwa’s disappointed how bad of a pawn V is even though V was the only one that survived the test tube experiments.

Have Mostly fixed the rest, work and health be kicking my butt which is why I haven’t been able to write much :weary_face:


Update time!

Chapter 6.2 was updated for Patron which is around 12K words.

I was kinda sick and then released it early then got better the next day, realised why I hadn’t released it yet and then re-released it after working on it a bit.

Chapter 6.3 is now in the works. Atm in the planning stage, though I might work on chapter 6.2 a little bit more since you can choose who to take out to “scout” (It’s initially A and I was thinking on expanding on it a bit more)

That’s pretty much it! Thanks for all the support you all! (Esp you @saltwaterwitch ^-^ )

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Fund typo during f Mel’s pov in exp wolf scene. Chose not to use pendent.

“She was about to intervene when Kye drove her knee into the Experimental’s groin.”

Mc is a male

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Melissa walked out to the roof, a cheery smile on his face and two trays of food in his hand.

Found another one after I Forgave the “bullies” (victims bc I broke the leaders arm and enjoyed it).

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Thankss! You’ll see these fixes in the next update! <3 (Don’t wanna mess up any one’s saves)

Update time!

Man the weeks are passing by in a blink of an eye.

Any who!

Chapter 6.3 is put on pause, it was around 800 words long before I went back to 6.2.

Chapter 6.2 is now around 16K words long! It’ll feature going out with Vigil, John/Elizabeth and Alex/Alice. I’ll be re-releasing it on the 18th-19th. Will be making it public on the next month’s 18th-19th.

Work has been kicking my butt so I’m hoping it’ll relent in the upcoming days, stay safe ya’ll!

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Found another one in Alice Pov

Alice started to shake him, gently at first, but when nothing happened, she started to jolt her violently.

My Mc is male

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nah, Nathan basically trusted the Church of Solathis and made a deal with them, which is (I think) revealed later on!

I swear I came back to this like 6 times, will be sitting down today and do nothing but edit! There are no words that I can use that will express how thankful I am, so I hope a simple thank you is enough to convey it :heart:


Update time!

Patron version has been reupdated and the chapter now sits at around 17.5K

Chapter 6.3 is now being worked on, and currently sits at 1K words.

Most of the week was spent on drafting and planning and thankfully that has finished! Will take two days to edit the previous chapters, again, massive thanks to @saltwaterwitch! <3

That’s pretty much it! Thanks for all the support and I hope you all have a lovely weekened!!

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Stayed up all night playing this. Definitely one of my favourite WIPs to date :heart: One issue I noticed was that I chose the option of killing Greggory but it later showed me that he was alive and well.

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Thank you! I fixed it before but I still haven’t updated it cause it kinda messes up with people’s saves so I’ll update it on 15th along with the new chapter! Thanks for pointing it out!! :heart:


Update time!
So, this week was slower then usual, and by that I mean, I didn’t just wake up, work, eat, work, sleep and looped it all over lol And since this was a slow week, I got to write up lots!

Around 7K words were written! Which is quite a lot of words in a long time!

Around 2K words were unfortunately deleted so this puts the newest chapter at 6K words.

Lots of bugs were fixed. Pronouns, to options not being put in. Chapter 5 also saw a few more options added where you can agree with Adrian without being rude. Chapter 1’s beginning is also being re-written.

And that’s pretty much it! I’m hoping that I’ll release chapter 6.3 on the 15th-18th! Massive thank you to all my supporters and all my readers!! It’s you guys who keep me motivated and it makes me really happy reading all kinds of feedbacks :heart:

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Monday’s Update!

This week was pretty productive!

Around 6K words were written, which puts the chapter at 12K words!

There will be three routes that can be taken, then two routes again, more time that you can spend with Alex/Alice or Adrian. You can also skip it.

A lot of issues were fixed, took an entire Sunday for me to fix. Massive thanks to Saltwateritch once again!

That’s all folks! I’m hoping to release the new chapter on the 17 and release the previous chapter on the 15th. I think this chapter might reach 20K words so I, hopefully, won’t take more then 10 days.

Anyways, thanks for being such a great motivation to me! I wish you all an amazing week :heart:

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So uhhh, that has been updated, I couldn’t come to a decision on whether to make it Alpha or Predator, and a friend suggested that a werewolf pack already has an Alpha so it may confuse, hence why the mistake. It’s been fixed <3

Yeah, I want to show the level of what the MC needs to get to!

Ngl, you gave me all the emotions I wanted my readers to feel, so I’m really glad haha. You have no idea how much you made my day <3 (and how many days you’ve made, with how long I’ve been juggling editing and adding more work into the book lol)