Despite the choice of NOT letting Prof. Alex in on the plan or not, Alex enters and Kelly is out…
I WANT Kelly’s route 
So far, my favourite (RO) characters are Kelly and then Alex (they’re an RO, right?)…
WoW, it looks like all the routes are jumbled up and it’s giving me a nasty headache… No offense, I like this story but I don’t like this update at least for now…
It says Alex is in and Kelly is out of the plan/ scheme/ space heist, but in the next scene Kelly is in again?!?
Okay. I’m going back through the code. We are firmly in “Thomas had never seen such a mess” territory. Maybe hold off on playing Chapter 9 if you haven’t already.
I tried it for a chapter or two and I’m just not good at writing that way. I’m looking forward to revising it to be more readable but in the drafts it’s probably going to remain the way it is. I’ll keep trying but it’s much easier to fix in revision than first draft. Thanks for your patience!
I have one complaint: The pages are very short- there’s only a few sentences on each page, are you going to make them longer? I keep having to click “next” over and over.
It might be fixed! I made some changes but need to test some other things so no guarantees. The code is slightly less spaghetti but i’m bored of debugging and want to go back to writing lol. I’ll go over it again while i’m testing chapter 10. Thank you for reading this useless post.
Hello! Just wanted to update everyone that progress is coming along very well on this. it’s not an abandoned WIP! Chapter 10 and 11 are complete (another 16000 words) but i’m going to hold off on publishing just yet. Since i’m approaching the end I want to make sure the third act works narratively. I’ll post once the complete draft is done, which should be this month. So… hang in there for a few more weeks. Thank you! 
G’Luck with the writing @SpokesWriter and congratulations on almost finishing it…
Hello, friends! I am thrilled to announce that I’ll be completing the rough draft (as well as subsequent revisions) shortly (as in, April at some point) and won’t be uploading any further chapters publicly to the dashingdon WIP. If you’d like to read the second/third draft and provide feedback, I would be thrilled to have your input whether you’re a regular poster in this thread or just kind of lurked (or this is reaching your screen for the first time and the concept interests you! hello! though, maybe read a couple chapters and make sure you don’t hate it.)
Feel free to express your interest by posting in this thread, PMing me, or emailing me (which you can PM me for, lol)
If you need any beta-testers, I’d love to help :3
Also congrats on almost finishing the first draft ^^
Like I said already, I too would love to help testing your game @SpokesWriter.
@SpokesWriter can I become a beta reader I will give you my most honest opinion about wea
Your game is awesome or not but it’s awesome sorry I wasn’t done m add king the message I didn’t mean to send accidentally.
you can edit your previous post with the little pencil icon on the bottom right of your post
Just wanted to give everyone an update – I’m absolutely still accepting beta readers and I’m currently projecting the draft to be ready a week or so into May. Thanks for your patience so far. I ended up writing a lot more for each of the endings than i expected lol
Oh yeah! Sorry for the double post (kind of… if i were really sorry i wouldn’t have done it.) I’ve added a potential cover art to the first post. I commissioned an artist and did the text myself, but undecided if it’s the final version yet. I think it looks neato though!
That cover looks pretty good, nice work!
Hello! Last call for (the first batch of) Beta readers. I have ~2000 more words to write and then i’m going to do a full edit over the next week or so, and then i’m going to send the link out! If you’ve contacted me, i’ve got you on the list. If you haven’t and want to, go for it! email/DM/post in this thread!
okay, back to the book!
Thanks for coming along on the ride, everybody! I’ll wrapping this topic up and sending out the Beta later today. DM me to be added if you like, i’ll be accepting feedback for the next week or two
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