She looks great, won’t lie thought her hair was longer cause it said she had a ponytail during the run lol.
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Ya know the whole curving bullet thing reminds me of a movie I saw years ago lol
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@No_This_Is_Patrick Yes, the artist made a mistake. But I decided to keep it since I like this rendition better.
@Ava_Xx Glad you like it.
@Valixon I don’t know about a movie. I got the idea from Jojo’s Bizarre Adventures.
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Don’t mind me here. I’m just gonna hunker down and make camp awaiting the next update. 
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@Astralise.Ink it was basically a movie about these assassins who are suppost to follow the threads of fate. They get corrupted by taking it into there own hands and end up recruiting this supposed nobody who infact is tied to them from his father… I forget all the actors but Angelina jolie sorry if I misspelled the name or am wrong lol was one of the assassin’s. It was a decent movie but they had the whole curving bullets to hit targets that are behind barriers among other things lol.
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You got her name right, the movie was called “Wanted” btw. It was one of those movies that really wanted you to think it was cool lol.
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It was a JoJo reference all along
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Bad guy: I’m going to take this random lady as a hostage and bargain my way out of here
Twilight: kills the hostage first for a laugh
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@Sakura_Higanbana28 Haha! This chapter is getting longer by the minute. I am considering splitting the update.
@Valixon Yeah! Now I remember the trailers.
@Big_fan1231 Yeap.
@Ava_Xx Lmao!
@lokis_hairgel Twilight can be crazy at times. XD
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I am 15000 words into the next chapter. In the meantime, here’s an official art of Inspector Flavia Belmonte.
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I can’t wait to see Flavius
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Love how many artworks we have gotten for this game. All of them are brilliant(except Leone of course)
Also can all the art be updated in the official art of main post as well
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I am SUDDENLY a lot less opposed to Belmonte putting the cuffs on me.
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@Cingulum_diaboli I think she’s working on Flavius next.
@Big_fan1231 I have been meaning to update it, but I am constantly out of time because of work and writing.
@Oreven Haha!
@JBento Oh yeah. I would be down for it too.
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Yeah I don’t break the consensus here xd Amelia puts my Charismatic MC to shame.
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I have a question. This next chapter is about to cross 20000 word and it still isn’t finished. Should I upload the part that’s done or wait to finish the chapter?
- Upload as it is
- Finish the capter
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@Valixon The bending/curving bullets reminds me of Wanted. With James Mcavoy and Angelina Jolie.