More like the more power you have
Kitsune essentially get a new tail every 100 years.
Can anyone tell me what species is sera before she become nymph?
She used to be a angel before turning to one. @Mlz
Is that mentioned somewhere in the book or from the author ?
@sakura_higanbana28
I wonder her wings are is if her a nephilim before
Her family is a prominent family of the nephilim faction⌠until they are all murdered.
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Thank you !
Huge fan of the series, think youâre an incredible writer. Iâm super excited for this to be finished and to read it in all its glory.
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- Having not played the first ones in a while, the recap on Frostbite and some key stuff was appreciated.
- As always I love seeing the dynamic of Seraphina and anyone else explored. In this case, Seraphina and Leon make for an unlikely duo as both stubborn individuals who are unlikely to change a thing about themselves. The impression I got however, is that out of everyone, these two respect/like the other the most (Aside from the MC) as they both come from political backgrounds and I felt that they began to demonstrate a kinship in this. I LOVE this dynamic for these two, especially with Sera nudging leon to improve his abilities in her own way, and Leon not wanting her to go fight alone.
- Love the return of Dear Delacroix.
- I took the Leon romance path and the scene with him feeling upset made my heart ache, I love how youâre developing these characters.
All in all this is a fantastic demo and youâre a great writer. 
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Thanks, everyone, and happy New Year!
Update 1/1: The demo now contains the end of Chapter 3, which includes the RO subplots getting underway and MC finally getting to interrogate a certain captured Frostbite agentâaround 28,000 words of new content. Iâve also added the option to skip to a given chapter after character creation.
Thank you as always for all of your support! I hope you enjoy the update! 
Demo link: https://dashingdon.com/play/daydreamsincolor/keeper-of-life-and-death/mygame/
Word Count: ~92,000 words
Most likely, provided I can find a way to write it that seems realistic
Thereâs an option to side with Frostbite if Dominic wasnât captured
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Is there also a way for that not to happen while still having mom/Isabella be happy?
I mean, for all that he may come from a far too rich family of conservative Republican donors my mc would tolerate ambassador Liu far better than his sperm donor.
Besides, apart from the ambassador himself the mc would hopefully have to deal with dreadful in-laws only once or twice a year on average. Plus my mc will get experience with that anyway, particularly since Altyâs father doesnât like him much either and he has yet to meet the extended Adtaz family and associates. 
Ouch! This really hurts CressyâŚas, without borrowing from Leon, my mc has exactly one good suit that actually fits well. Everything else is ultra-cheap, ill-fitting, fast-fashion crap he has to order online due to no time for conventional shopping. 
AwwwâŚpoor mc, still not getting invited to any of the nice events he might actually want to go to. 
But then again, heâs likely NMCâs worst dressed âcelebrityâ by now. So maybe thatâs why.
Ugh! Mc has to buy fast fashion crap online that is guaranteed to be ill-fitting but cannot buy an old beater of a car online? Unlike his clothes a car just has to work well enough to get him from a to b. Anything more is just icing on the cake.
But mc is established to be able to driveâŚso canât they just rent a carâŚI mean they do get paid now. Or is it that all the car rental agencies donât want to deal with mc due to their record of property damage?
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Awww yuss!!!
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More coherent feedback to come!
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- Missing word.
- Sentence sounds weird, maybe it is missing a word.
- Stray*
I was so excited and happy to see the update! Keep up the good work and happy 2022!
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Congrats on the update Brynn, and happy new year!!
Dropping some things that I found on the update:
As Fay said, there is a word missing, I think it might be âworkâ?
easy way
Missing word in the first and in the second one I think the now might be a little redundant and the sentence would be better without it
Not really a mistake but I think that for those keepers that are Julianâs kid, a less emotional option would be good too, like âwhy did you do that to my mum?â, simply stating âI know you are my fatherâ, etc
I didnât get screenshots of these things but, if you use the âset stats directlyâ and then jump to chapter 3, the game doesnât recognize who you are romancing (the dream scene had an empty space before the âholds your handâ line and you donât get their scene). I had this problem with Yakov, someone else mentioned having it with Kol and I think that with Cressida or Katia too
Last, in chapter 2, when you are talking with Seraphina and your suitemates about Marcela, when you pick âdo you still not trust her?â the following page has no text and only a box with options, so there is clearly a scene/dialogue missing.
Have a lovely week!
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So far what is your favourite LI??
Astrid for sure
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Dominic ;-;
YakovđĽ°
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Altyâs the cutest little incubus. 
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Leon Dalton supremacy <3
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