I see…that’s kinda disappointing if I just go off some of the comments ppl have made…
It’s a great pun, though lol.
@daydreamsincolor will MC’s lack of sleep have any impact on their ability to function in life threatening situations? Considering the fact that MC seems to get into one at least once a month, I’m hoping there’s going to be some drawbacks to their dedication to getting stronger.
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I’ve never posted here, so I decided to pop in and tell you that I really enjoyed this update. There were times when I had a geniuine smile on my face while reading.
And this? This made me laugh. So you’re saying that some things at universities are universally true, no matter where you live? 
I really like your writing style, and the sense of humour. The characters are also very likeable (yes, even Kol. And yes, he is problematic. Can’t hate him though.).
I found some small problems while reading though.
Summary
You need a capital letter here.
I think the pagebreak might be needed after the first sentence. It flows weirdly now. BTW, I love Aunt Dru.
Something is missing here:
And here:
I also found a small problem while I was skimming the code.
I think it should be encourageLiu +1.
As for other things, I’m certain that aunt Dru was at one point a cambion. Was it changed? That part looks like I wasn’t imagining the cambion thing:
It doesn’t really work for a nephilim though. A pity, I really like this turn of phrase.
Shouldn’t Dad have a slightly different reaction since the two of them already met at least once?
I’ll say it again: a really nice update. I’ve noticed that once you added some additional small scenes, the pacing got better. And one more thing: i have a blast every single time I read about suitmate bonding events.
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ngl i kinda cried a little during the snow globe scene 
so wholesome. but am also wondering if it’s strictly an american tradition because i’ve never created my own before.
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I don’t think so. Or at least, I’ve never heard of it being done. It might be one of the less popular traditions that I just don’t know about.
Edit: I once again have a question. Does anyone know what happened to Kol’s parents? I don’t recall him talking about them (though it’s entirely possible that I could have just forgotten) and I’d like to know? Also, if MC does know what happened to his parents, how do they find out? Is it through some shady means, like how MC finds out about Katia’s parents or does Kol tell MC?
@daydreamsincolor what species is Marcela?
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I was thinking add the word “fallen” to the description and it would fit much better … a fallen angel on the ice, but to each their own.
If you mean suitemate bonding events – in my experience when a whole dorm/suite go through first year together, these events occur, both spontaneously and organized.
When the dorm/suite is a mixed class and people are experiencing different phases of their college life, then events are more based on the existing social groups people have.
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Here’s another suggestion, if you want to implement it. Maybe let an MC on Astrid’s RO subplot expose Davina for getting favors/special treatment because she’s Conti’s niece. I don’t think that’s the kind of thing my MC would stay quiet about, especially when they have the opportunity to tell all of NMC the truth about Davina and the corrupt leaders in NMC’s government.
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Davina is an interesting character for me because i am still not sure whether she was willingly helping Reyna or was she compelled ?
And what will be her stand now? will she switch side to MC or continue to serve the dark side ?
I hope we could have a choice of trying to " help " Davina to understand her wrong doing and save her from the dark side , she is kind of like Harley Quinn to me, and it is a difficult task to persuade her to abandon joker, but nontheless trying to “help” Davina redeem herself is definitely a unique action for my MC
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She could become an anti-hero and help MC just to benefit her own motives. I could totally see her doing that.
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Doesn’t seem a bad thing for me, a Win-Win situation, against a world ending foe , we need as many allies as possible .
But in a Astrid romance route, i will demand her to show more respect to Astrid
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I could see that as well.
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Love the update, I think there’s some scenes that don’t appear tho. You see when asked who ambassador to pick I went with Liu (now in the previous update the game would tell that the scene when we meet him is in development but now it just doesn’t appear). I dunno if thats an error or not, it could just be that I have to go to the human winter solstice celebration (but I gotta be with my girl Sera xd).
In case it helps I was going for a Drakaina/Both parents/Sera route run.
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Wonder how she’d end up helping MC though. If it’s true that Reyna compelled her, then she probably doesn’t remember much about her evil plans or whatever she was doing. If Reyna didn’t compel her, then helping MC would blow her whole “woe is me I was compelled by Reyna” story. And in any case, even if she could help, I doubt my MC would want her to, since, like Reyna, she’s a big reason why MC is so traumatized.
I don’t think she was. I mean, the way she reacted to Reyna killing Jaime made it seem like she was pretty lucid. Of course her compulsion could have worn off exactly when Reyna killed him, but that’s a little too coincidental in my opinion. She probably helped Reyna for some unknown reason, not knowing that she was capable of murder, then ended up really shocked when Reyna actually did kill someone.
Also, where was Davina during the Reyna fight? I don’t think the cops showed up until after, and I remember Davina’s hellhounds coming after MC but I don’t recall her ever attacking. Did she manage to escape or did she just choose to stay out of it?
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If you’re referring to the final fight against Reyna, she was in the hospital recovering at the time. There was a scene where it’s explained to the MC that she had been under control magic for at least a year. The MC describes her as looking like a broken doll.
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I didn’t recall what happen to Davina either because i was preoccupied with Reyna, and seems like didn’t mention about her at all , most likely still in shock and regretting …
With such traumatic experience , she will continue broken, insane or go back to her master one day if no one care for her.
Wish MC could at least help her out so that she could blend in to society again…
About Davina helping, i am thinking of asking her to bait Reyna coming out to confront her , or just to add her strength in the upcoming fight, she will be totally free by manage to defeat her old puppet master
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I wanted to suggest that Lysander was present at the ball where MC is, it could be an interesting scene for the MC who is his son and hates him.
Also, I wanted to ask how Sera and MC can deal with the size of the dragons, is there any magic to limit their size?
General question: are there any plot points from book one you feel have been inadequately addressed thus far in book two? I’ve tried to keep track of everything, but given the scope of book one, I’m sure I’ve missed something 
Thanks for the feedback!
For now, their lack of sleep will be causing emotional issues more so than survival ones
@Karenira
Thank you very much!! Thanks for the error catches, all should be fixed now!
I remember doing it once or twice in grade school. It also seemed like something Astrid would find on the in-universe Pinterest equivalent 
They were killed by hunters; Kol tells MC in one optional magician scene in book one. I’ll be sure to drop it in somewhere else too, thanks!
Drakaina
Thanks for the suggestion!
Their meeting has been moved to the solstice party. I’ll clarify this, thank you!
She was in the forest during the fight, and shortly thereafter ended up in the hospital.
Re: Davina, in Sera’s route in Chapter 8 MC will get to see some of Davina’s past with Reyna, particularly the night of the summoning. (Of course, MC is still allowed to question how much of it is real… )
Thanks for the suggestion!
No, but they’re basically the size of dogs right now, so they’re still okay being house pets.
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Glad to find out what she is!
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The Keeper of the day and night taught me one thing never trust an organization some people will bite you in the ass and stab you in the ass someone that pretend to be friends and then stab you in the ass again but you can trust your buddies that actually care about you just don’t trust people who send you tons of tons of tons of friend requests that’s not your true friends don’t shove you in a spike if you do something wrong come in my personal life you just got to worry about the Fanatics and being popular and people viewing you the savior of the world just because you’re one person called The Keeper the other two are not my life but you get the just
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