Ideally, what do you look for in a first time demo?

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@AChubbyBlackCat

Correct spelling and punctuation is a must however. If you’re writing throughout the demo is rife with spelling errors, I’m immediately turned off. It looks unprofessional and gives the impression the author was too lazy to spell check their own work.

I’m kind of nit picky, so spelling errors just show the overall story might be sloppy. Something as simple as copying and pasting into a word or google doc then running a spell check should be done. If it isn’t? Eh.