I, the Unbroken One [ITFO Sequel] [August 19, 2025] [Short Story Poll]

[TheOne1]

This is amazing, hoping you have fun while writing

[Lang3r]

So glad the demo is out

[Maxz]

I, the Forgotten One is my favourite choicescript game so I’m glad the sequel is here.I have no doubt it will better then the original.

[fsix]

Hmm, another bug, but this is more wide-spread.

The first game defined Marshal’s “mental path” as a number between 1-3. The sequel does it a little differently in the character creation, shifting the numbers by -1:

The Marshal's relationship with ${his} own mental health could best be described as...

*fake_choice
	#"I need help."
		*set MentalPath 0
	#"I need to help myself."
		*set MentalPath 1
	#"Pain is my penance."
		*set MentalPath 2

… but then in Chapter 1 the game with a single, initial exceptions, fails to observe this new method and falls back on the old one:

*if (MentalPath = 1)
	you can't deal with it by yourself.
*if (MentalPath = 2)
	the effort it takes to hold yourself back is exhausting.
*if (MentalPath = 3)
	you catch yourself on the verge of slipping, on the verge of falling back into weakness.

etc. As the result, the text variants don’t match MC’s supposed mentality, as defined in the character creator.

(it’ll be probably simpler to adjust the character creator to follow the old scheme, than adjust all these entries)

[ZipZoop]

[SclauS]

OhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGodOhmyGod

Im so excited I just don’t have words to express myself! Finally!! I was waiting for this moment!!!

[an_nisa]

OH MY GOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!!!

I was soooo bored so I just casually scroll the forum for new content AND I SAW YOU POST!!!

I want to scream my lungs out but I’m at work

(I haven’t read it yet. I’m too excited when I saw the post lmao)

[GenericUsername]

Ah yes very good. Usurper is definitely the way to go, so I can get the ultra angst of eventually killing our sister.

[Navient]

AHHHHH WE ARE SO FUCKING BACK!! Literally was just opening up cogdemos’ main page and sees the new demo at the top and i legit jumped out of my seat

[Thundeebird]

Seriously. Welcome back

[PurpleCritter]

This is great news, congrats!! I am excited to explore the new demo as soon as I can (and see if I can remember my character’s previous choices, might be time for a replay lol)

[Miznie]

YOOO the goat is back. I have a headache but imma reread the demo rn anyway

[Bulk_Biceps]

finally a sequel! ive been waiting for so long!

[Miznie]

Looks like a pronoun error. Pretty sure it’s supposed to say “He was twice her age”

[Knoez]

I’m wondering is there a choice where velinor survived and wasn’t killed in action? Because in my playthrough he was survived.

[Miznie]

A few more errors.

[smileyyy]

I don’t believe the beginning of a game on this platform has ever left me as unsettled as it did on this one. Veluska’s execution, her initial acceptance of death transformed into panic and fury later is nothing short of heartbreaking. The fact that she had seen her child for the first and last time just moments before she died, and that Marshal had seen her real mother for the first and last time in her death - tragic.

Good luck with this one.

[Sujan_Dhakal]

Lose the final battle in the first game or retreat

[Sujan_Dhakal]

I do think they saw each other during the trial as well so this wouldn’t be the first time, agreed it’s massive gut punch though

[Starkness]

Playing the route where Ellie is queen and get this when The marshal walks to the throne room