I dunno… it just seems weird to me. “A small stature” just seems incomplete to me, like what is small in stature?
Similarly you wouldn’t even say “A small in stature, no taller than a young boy”
I think I misphrased my post also, what I probably meant was that it’s missing a subject.
No you def wouldn’t say that lol, and you’re right it is missing a subject. You’d say, “He is small in stature, no taller than a young boy.”
The character herself does use rather archaic terms, so I was going for that feel. But you’re right and that was a grammatical error on my end.
You’re right, that was a grammatical error on my end. Thanks for mentioning it!
Oooh~ I really like this. An Asian modern-day fantasy themed IF is uncommon but actually quite refreshing. And I’m happy to see disabled ROs, as that is also uncommon. Definitely looking forward to updates 
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