February 2025 Feedback Offer/Request Thread

Here’s a thread for offering or requesting feedback on WIPs. Please use the following templates when making your post. They’re based on some that Eiwynn made for a previous thread; let me know if there’s anything that would be useful to add or tweak.


REQUESTING FEEDBACK

  • Username:
  • Name of Project/Game:
  • Genre:
  • Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback:
  • Type of feedback that you are seeking (eg characters, pacing, worldbuilding, stats, choices, spelling/grammar):
  • Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting (eg explicit content, gore, etc):
  • Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact. Be sure to indicate if DMing is allowed:

OFFERING FEEDBACK

  • Username:
  • Genres/tags that interest you as a reader:
  • Hard passes. Things that mean you will not play a game (eg: gender-lock, extreme horror)
  • Time commitment:
  • Specific qualifications that would help authors (eg: you use a screen reader):
  • Any contact info the author can use to connect to you. Be sure to indicate whether DMing is allowed or not:

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Offering Feedback:

  • Username: @ChanceOfFire
  • Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: No preference.
  • Hard passes: None
  • Time commitment: My schedule is quite variable, contact me for an answer.
  • Specific qualifications that would help authors: N/A
  • Any contact info the author can use to connect to you: DM me. Indicate if you want feedback via DM, thread comments or itch comments.

(I’m taking a break. Please consider this feedback offer on hold.)

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OFFERING FEEDBACK

  • Username: @Omeg
  • Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: No preference
  • Hard passes. None
  • Time commitment: Not really doing much at the moment
  • Specific qualifications: I use my PC for everything, so I can’t tell how something looks on mobile
  • Contact: DMing is fine
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OFFERING FEEDBACK

  • Username: @AChubbyBlackCat
  • Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: Urban Fantasy, Horror, Fantasy, Light Sci-Fi, Mystery, Romance, Light Superhero
  • Hard passes: Gender Locked (Either), Historical Fiction, Political Fiction
  • Time commitment: Sporadic and in infrequent bursts of availability.
  • Specific qualifications that would help authors: N/A
  • Any contact info the author can use to connect to you: DMs are fine. Threads are also fine.
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OFFERING FEEDBACK

  • Username: Xiapharre
  • Genres/tags that interest you as a reader: Romance, horror, fantasy, sci-fi— Honesty I’m into most anything xD
  • Hard passes. None
  • Time commitment: I do work a 40-50 hour job, so my availability can be a little sporadic, but I do check the forums regularly!
  • Specific qualifications that would help authors: I’m a mobile player, so I can give feedback on how it looks via phone.
  • Any contact info the author can use to connect to you: Dming me here is preferable!
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REQUESTING FEEDBACK

  • Username: Wannabe_Human

  • Name of Project/Game: Wonderland Noir: Through the Looking Glass

  • Genre: Horror, Magical Realism, Depression, Surreal, Mystery

  • Timeframe in which you need (or would prefer) feedback: Indefinite

  • Type of feedback that you are seeking (eg characters, pacing, worldbuilding, stats, choices, spelling/grammar): Pacing, writing quality, dialogue, general thoughts on story, spelling mistakes, really whatever you’re willing to give

  • Any content notes/warnings that readers should be aware of before starting (eg explicit content, gore, etc): Hoo boy. Graphic violence, drug abuse, depictions of suicide attempts, implied sexual assault, depression as a primary theme, PC in prior established sexual relationship, explicit content, VERY DARK

  • Link to the WiP thread, or other means of direct contact. Be sure to indicate if DMing is allowed: [WIP] Wonderland Noir: Behind the Looking Glass (Disco Elysium meets Tom Waits' Alice, 18+) NEW CASE ADDED (67k words)

DMs allowed.

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