Dragon Kin (WIP)

Well we aren’t full dragons yet and a spear is better than claws to pierce between scales also dracos can fly we can do a high speed spear attack

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The archery contest makes it seem that the hunter has some skill with a bow but there is a dedicated skill for using a bow. Maybe the hunter should start with some skill with the bow?

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This is one of the best fantasy WIPs I have read in a while. I liked that Pov changes show different characters’ thoughts about what’s going on in that current moment. I enjoyed everything from making a new friend to where the story ends for now. I’ve been searching for a fantasy book with adventurer guilds and rankings for a while. I’m looking forward to seeing more of the journey that the MC will have.

I just can’t wait for Gavin/Eve to hear the rumors about two dragons at the city, one that protected humans, and come running. :grin::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Interesting, is there a way for us (MC) get stronger or grind?

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I mean, I gained magic barrier spell at the mage academy and upgraded my herbalist skill to Herbalist 2 Elixir Boogaloo by going to the scholar academy. :sweat_smile:

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Amazing how far this project has come since the last time I checked it out! Has been great. I didnt expect that the Festival would end in the way it did, but i like it a lot.^^

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Hey, I’m actually new all together to usually demos. Just wanted to say thanks for making as much as you did so far. This W.I.P as I see was a reason someone else and I created accounts. I’m not trying to glaze or anything but thanks. I actually made a Reddit post about looking for books that involve dragon kin and imagine my surprise when yours was recommended. Please don’t abandon this and if you ever publish this I’ll buy it :folded_hands:

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I enjoyed the update, I wasn’t expecting for things to end without being exposed, but I’m looking forward to seeing how things continue, as it seems set up that we leave a lot of hints behind in Evernorth.

I did find an error with the appraisal in the adventurers guild for the appear orb, in d1_AG2 it checks for trade = “healer”, when it should be “herbalist”. The same issue is in d1_AG8 as well. This is in Chapd.

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It could play out either way. After all we did kind of ditch the old place on that fateful day as soon as adventurers came. They might think we’ll still hiding in the wilderness somewhere. We only fought because the bandit went for them and we became friends back then. We might not care for any strangers

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