BREACH: Chicago War Zone (WIP) (UPDATED! 20-July-2025)

Gabrielle seems to know MCs parents, lsince she says MC resembles them. This arc of uncovering the MC’s parents identities will be exciting and terifying at the same time

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Rolled a Natural 20 and seemed to have gotten the result that I rolled a Natural 1 instead.

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I’ve played a few times now and every time says I don’t have ammo, so I don’t think is related to the dice itself

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Sadness.

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I don’t think so either. Ironically the first time I played this, I rolled a N1 on this part so I assumed that nothing was wrong since the previous book had a couple of N1s resulted in the Raphael running out of ammo at the worst time.

A quick review about the Archangel route. It will be a little sloppy, but this is about mainly to show the most noticeable errors.

Instead of breaking them into just grammar or continuity errors, I will just show all of them now… by writing them down, because putting in images is another level for me.

The quickly park against the curb,…

The is written instead of they.

You can see Raquel Jumping out with her Saiga-12…

You can see the barrel of Gabriel’s FN FAL rifle…

Wrong capitalization in the word jumping. Gabriel is using either an FN FNC or the SA80 he got back in the first book.

In the car chase the two cartel assassins are called cops in one sentence.

You wonder where She’s going…

Wrong capitalization.

Mouse is written with lowercase letter few times.

Alright, Me and Michael are going to…

Wrong capitalization in the word me.

If you mess up the intimidation check at the warehouse with Rook and Bishop, You turn around and see you turn around will be written.
Bishop’s machine gun is capitalizated.

After the warehouse:

…Raquel all waiting for you.Gabriel…
Choice: Nothing I could handle

No space after the dot.
It’s “Nothing I couldn’t handle” correctly.

If you check on Rook, rook ( the chestpiece) is written with uppercase letter.

The bank is heist is still bugged. No matter what you choose, you’re going to the sewer.

In the phone you can’t see your crew’s data and the messages.

That’s for now. Two throughout review will come when I finally learn how to put in images.

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Ah, so good to see Raquel again, can’t wait for the rest of the game.
Everytime I see one of the “silent persuasion” options, I imagine something like this:

Success:
tenor (5)

Fail:
tEYnhJ_1

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Nope, new game, new cheats. Good luck finding it! (It’s actually in the discord server, pinned in the spoiler discussion channel… It’s also where I’m most active!)

That’s actually a success, you just ran out of ammo. If you had some ammo, it would show differently

This might be a bug… I’ll look into it.

Much thanks!! This is very appreciated. I’ve been going through a lot of them so they might be duplicate, but thank you nonetheless!

The fine line between things going awkward and successful

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I’ll replay through again (see if I can’t get a N20 too) and check my ammo to see if I have no ammo and the text is showing or if I have ammo and it’s showing. :slight_smile:

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I think something’s odd with this selection, if you romance gabriel in book 1 the game shouldn’t give you the option to shoot him. It’s been a while since i played but i vaguely remember that you can only shoot him if your RO isnt him or are alone.

The option to tell him that you work with the law is also there even after the picking him as an RO which shouldn’t be possible.

Also in he asks why mc turned informat even though i was already a an undercover detective in the beginning

I think this meant to say Financial reports

Grammar error?

Loving the new update, it’s nice to see how reality of everything going on is starting to show and settle in around the mc, like how the grittyness surrounding the criminal life in the archangel route starts to protrude and how father murdok is being exposed in a less favorable view in the fbi one.

The dream sequences are absolute :ok_hand: was fun to have glimpses on how the actions and events on both routes affect the mc psychologically, archangel route having them need to come to terms to the fact that their killing a buncha people and the fbi route smacking em in the face with the rollercoaster of emotions and memories that lead them there.

Also, what happens to the cat and necklace we left behind after leaving the archangels, will they come back to us? Will we be able to go hang out in the fbi path or are we cursed to stay imprisoned in the building and wear nothing but green tied suits all day :sob:?

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I definitely just did not finish playing this demo for the 5th time :eyes:. But I just noticed something when I picked Kaz in my team.

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I’m currently playing a male character. If I remember correctly, isn’t Kaz straight in the first game? If so, shouldn’t the choice to be with him greyed out for guys? I’ll admit it, I actually don’t care what you will do with it :joy:. I tried to romance him on my first run of TAJ, only to get it squished :sob: :joy:

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@MichaelMaxwell how do i win the staring contest with Rook?

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Are there going to be psychological repercussions if Mouse dies? I kinda want my MC to go insane and just maybe go on a murder spree.

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Especially if you romanced Mouse

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I’m confused, I must admit. Only I can romance Mouse. If you are, then that’s a pretty big bug.

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My bad, I’ll leave the mouse route alone for you

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Good thought, would love it. Imagine this: Mouse gets kidnapprd by Archangels, MC goes one man army and burns down half of Chicago. Damn my imagination js running wild with the possibilities.
Ie. One of the main trio is guarding Mouse, or just happens to be there, witnesses the blood-crazed MC, but MC spares them, saying a one liner before leaving:
“Don’t fuck with what’s mine…”

I kinda got carried away, didn’t I? :face_with_hand_over_mouth::rofl:

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You wild i like it.Full on Kratos mode.

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I’m a little confused at this part :thinking:

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The Trio told you that Gabrielle, Gabriel’s sister and head of the Canadian Archangels, has an informant working for The Cartels. He’s willing to give the trio everything he knows about The Archangels, …

I think it must be “about The Cartels”

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There’s actually a cheat that’ll force the dice to fail or roll a natural 1 so you can test out certain outcomes. You can type in iamthecaptainnow in the cheat menu in the difficulty settings before every chapter.

Found and fixed!

Also fixed

I’m so glad you liked it! This is all pretty much a new theme of writing eventhough it’s the same old game.

The cat may or may not get back to you. The necklace? It’ll always find it’s way back to you. :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

Yes you will get to hangout with your team members. You will also be able to take on side missions for investigations and FBI raids to gain new weapons or gear.

I don’t think you can :sweat_smile: which chapter is this and where?

Well… yes and no. It all depends on how you play out the MC. There will be constant reminder of it, it’s not something can forget easily, but how you deal with it is up to you, going full mental might be a bit pushing it, but, you’ll get a chance at some kind of revenge, sometime soon…

Found and fixed!

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