Oh, I absolutely love it tbh, just hope there might be a payoff for sticking to AA romance but even if not I’ll still stay true to best girl/boy. Also I know it’s been a few days but just wanted to confirm that it is indeed working now and I’m glad I got to see more of caph and it made me realize I have a problem. Her helping the kid made think “she might be a devil but I can fix her” 
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Happy to hear that you’re enjoying the story! As for Caph, let’s just say I have plans for her in Remnant 21 
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“I just wanted some pictures of myself” ok abel 
Also with this reveal no one on the team is normal anymore
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AB is an oddball, that’s for sure 
And yes, my intent was to make readers realize that nobody in that group is normal, reminds me of this meme 
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Hi Everyone,
I hope you’re all enjoying the story of BTI so far, I did have a question regarding pacing. Because I’m writing a lot of branching paths, it’s hard for me to get a good grasp of the pacing for a single play through. I’d love to hear your thoughts on the story’s pacing and other parts regarding the structure, plot, etc.
As always thank you for reading!
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Why do i have a feelin Hector is an Apostleee
PS: I can’t believe we can play as Apollo on the new updateeee holyyy schmu-amazin(Imasuckerforstarcrossedloversromance)
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That’s an interesting theory!
Also, I’m glad that you enjoyed the update! 