Thank you!
I was having difficulty finding testers here, but this was a pair of additional chapters for an already released game (I’m not sure if you played it). Anyway, it’s done and submitted to HG, so there’s that. I’m that guessing testing two disparate chapters in an already released game just didn’t make sense for a WIP thread.
(If anyone wants to buy Dragon of Steelthorne on sale, last chance in September. I’m probably not planning any further content updates. $2.99 for 170k words.)
My current WIP threads are locked, since I locked them when I went out for vacation. If anyone wants to comment on them, I can ask to unlock them now, but I’m not sure when I’m getting back to them anyway.
Otherwise, I was helping to line edit another game which a writer wanted to release. This is the second time I’m doing volunteer line editing (some people never learn 
), but anyway, does anyone want to see if I did an acceptable job? The link to my edited version is in my comment. I’m not a professional… so it will still be rough.
Edit: I’m doing this as a hobby too. I mean… I think most of us are. I do understand that RL interferes always. No pressure, of course.