Ashenmaw - Dragons of Marrowoods (WIP) (Dragon Fantasy) FEEDBACK NEEDED

A lunch break sketch of Vaelias; I will slowly work through some of the other characters as I can.

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oooooh :smiley: very nice.
Looking forward (hope the descriptions in the next update won’t hinder you ^^; )

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Thoughts on a potential character/RO who’d always have the same gender as the MC picks initially in Chapter 1?
Had an idea while writing.

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i am open to it.

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Sure why not.

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Im very very happy to hear from this one again.^^

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As soon as I read that. I knew.

But my brain tuned to something weird.

"This one likes … This one is happy … This one sends regards … "

Yay, Translucent ones that worship Protheans as God’s.

Yep. That is immediately where my brain went instead of, this WIP.

I love Dragons too.

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Feel free to elaborate :smiley:

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I will have to check out the updates I missed. As I know I saw more was added compared to my first read. I had apparently not put this on watch until, some few posts ago.

Ill have to read again to catch bit more.

The elaborate Mass Effect stuff, I’ll keep in its threads of Video Game.

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I have never played Mass Effect, so those references went right over my head ^^;

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Liked the new aditions and to meet some familiar faces along the way.^^

Looking forward to what comes next!

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working on a minor update that will add a bit of buffer between the question sessions in ch1.

post as mini update or wait till i have the rest typed up?

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i can wait for a little longer.

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For a moment the grown-ups concentrate on their tea, and you watch some very long birds fly by overhead, craning your neck in curiosity.

“Ah, the noodlegeese are already returning,” Padamonos observes, and Sarimyne shoves him playfully.

“Oh, don’t you already start putting nonsense in the child’s head,” she laughs and looks at you. “Those are green-fanned ibises, a species native to these parts, and sacred to several local cultures.”

working on the buffer bits for the questions in ch1 one and… Paddy, i need you to stahp

(also, yes, this means I’m almost-ish done with the next update)

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Lol. Its just like paddy to cause mischief.

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Seeing both Rhidi and Verdamiru are noodles (in their true form), I must decide who is the bigger noodle.

Which is harder than it sounds.

Gray dragons dwell in the desert and akin to desert snakes… albeit with thick toes like camels.

Green dragons commonly dwell in trees like anaconda, vines and squirrels…

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This absolutely scratches the itch for good dragon themed reading and I love my perpetually confused time traveling brother.

Definitely looking forward to being able to do more than hang out wrapped in other peoples clothing.

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little head’s up:
FINALLY done with the library scene and the new tidbits in the question sessions… now to do the rest of these chapters >:V

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Been looking forward to this.

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Well it’s NOT updated yet, I’m working on it

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