Hey there! Thank you so much for taking time to try out my dumb space game.
Hey there, too, @SirEdmund! Speaking as a copywriter (or those people who write ads and try to get your attention to buy their stuff), maaybe you shouldn’t start a game with a statement like “my dumb space game.”
Maybe you were going for a humorous voice, but some people won’t get that. They might actually think your space game is… dumb, and therefore not read it. I suggest giving reasons as to why people should read your story instead. That way, you’ll get feedback from the people who have similar interests as you.