A Mage Reborn, Book Two (WIP) - UPDATED April 5th, 2025 | Book One Released!

At least with that, even if something else is going on, I should be able to get enough to get the romance, so that’s something? :joy:
Thank you so much for taking the time to check this out so thoroughly. I’m really at a loss about that…
Could you poke me when you update that part? I think I’ll give myself a headache if I continue replaying the whole thing again and again in it’s entirety, for now :rofl:

Oh I totally believe you - I mean, the other players are proof, as you said.
But like I said, I had internet/DashingDon/something else crashes in the meantime, somewhere around the third part of the story, so maybe it was some sort of exceptionnal occurence due to a temporary bug / one of the crashes. :thinking: (as in, my stats seeming higher the first time I’ve played - the fact I DIDN’T get enough relationship points on the following playthroughs must be because of me missing an interraction somewhere and being unable to find it - unless a greyed-out choice somewhere actually gives a boost and I don’t have the required stats to pick it)

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This is your poke, then :sob: Sorry for the trouble–I’m rather proud of how his romance scenes turned out, so I hope it’ll be worth it.

If something goes astray again please PM me and I’ll seriously craft a choice-by-choice guide of all scenes that affects his relationship meter. In the meantime, please save often and use multiple slots :sob: :sob: :sob:

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Oh, that was fast! I’ll make a dinner break and then restart then!

Eeh, don’t worry, I always replay games many times, so it’s not an issue!
I’m sure it’ll make me appreciate these scenes even more!

I think that one scene will make me reach the required level anyway, so I may poke around a bit more to find more scenes, but it shouldn’t be required (and I’m often way too proud for guides haha :rofl:)

I actually save TOO often and on TOO many slots! If I had saved more rarely, I could have gone back to saves from my first playthrough to check out things.
And if I had used less slots, I could have switched between earlier and later points in a single playthrough. But I’m a bit of a save maniac!

No but seriously, thank you so much for your time with this weird case. At least it allowed to detect a missing relationship+ choice, I guess. Let’s see the bright side of things! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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If it helps, here are the choices that got me Leon romance:

When we arrive at the city, my Leon stat is at 27.

Choose “mess with milk maids” bringing it to 34.

When talking with Leon and he asks if it makes him childish choose “not at all” brings to 50:

at the ball, choose “urgent matter to discuss” brings to 55

When talking to Leon about trip choose “I wonder what their people are like” brings to 59.

The last choice is somewhat nested in a sequence. After the battle choose “you can talk to me about anything” then “I would die for your cause” leading Leon to ask why. Choose “I trust you unequivocally” raises Leon stat to 67 and leads immediately to the romance.

There may be other paths, but that’s what got me there. Hope it helps!

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Ahh thank you! I’m very impressed you caught that, I thought I was being subtle LMAO—actually, the blinding sunlight was the first line that came to me of this, funnily enough! And I love things bookending each other—in this case, peaceful darkness for the mc, vs the pain of living for Leon :). god, I know this looks REALLY bad but I swear I actually love him…

Thank you so much for your kind words! It was a lot of fun to write and it really helped me build Mesily in a way that made her much more real to me and avoid doing my homework lol but mostly Mesily! Thank you for reading and liking it :).

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Ohmygodconfusionagain!

I try not to use guides, but I checked out the early ones, and…

I didn’t have anything related to milk maids, nor Leon asking if something makes him childish…

I wonder if it’s restricted to some MC personalities.

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Damn that was haunting like for real!
Would love to have seen one written by you with Ilya part like that also,
(Would definitely get the feels again) didn’t expect that Leon ending you wrote that just threw me off my chair into the unknown.
You should consider taking up writing if you haven’t already your literature is just wow. @StarlitOpal
And yours to of course @Parivir, both of you should see to some kind of small collaboration.
It’s like Sun and Moon both opposites but still one in the the same that contrasts well with one another. Just a suggestion
But seriously did enjoy it

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It’s determined by your choice in the encampment chapter, i.e. whether you went back for reinforcements or charged ahead. With either path you should still be able to get Leon’s relationship meter high enough, so don’t worry too much about it :smile:

I’m definitely open to it if the opportunity arises. Seriously did not expect any fanfic of this going in, and certainly not any of this caliber. Damn.

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The scene with the milk maids is so charming and hilarious, one of my favorite moments with Leon so I highly recommend charging ahead at the encampment😂

Edit: actually it might mean not charging in woops.
Going with ilya’s plan I’m guessing means wait for reinforcements.

You mean, the part about rescuing the children?
My MC went in, if it’s about that. I don’t remember waiting for reinforcment at any point?
If it’s not that, could you specify the scene it is?

Ah thank you!! that’s incredibly flattering for you to say, I’m really glad that you liked it :D, “throwing me off my chair into the unknown” is an AMAZING compliment, and I’m going to sprinkle it into my vocabulary from now on, I swear it.

And I’d love to do an Ilya piece, once I can figure out a way to do her justice! She’s so loving and kind but also so determined—she’s absolutely wonderful, in other words. I started with Leon bc he was my first play through/I was like “dang, I can work with this”, but really Ilya deserves all the love in the world as well. And Saine. And Eli. Really, all of the characters are so good and deserving…

Ahhhh, if people are any nicer it’s gonna kill me :sob: that’s very generous of you to say! I’m extremely flattered :D. Also obviously open to it if the opportunity arises! It’s parivir’s world though, im just playing in the sandbox lmao. also, crowdsourcing titles better then “Leon is sad”, although the comedic potential has me tempted to leave it like that LMAO

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I think @MadAdam got it a little wrong, haha. You can only see the scene if you don’t charge in (I believe the verbatim choice is ‘Agree with Ilya’s plan’). You get the milkmaid scene (which is me shamelessly indulging in slapstick humor) and another, more poignant one with Leon tipsy in the inn.

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Aaah, I see.
I’ll go with Leon’s plan though, since that was my natural reaction in the game - I may try the other one later.
But that may be the explanation for the discrepancy in relationship gains. People who select the not going in path would apparently get the relationship ups, while people who went in wouldn’t?

that might be it, but I went with Leon’s plan and still triggered the romance route :woman_shrugging: it could be a weird/glitchy save!

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Really enjoying everything so far. Though I do want to point out a few things. The very first choice if you choose Guile making it seem like it was your plan, it reads that we had a reign of terror over the city. But after the last update everything pretty much happened in just one night where we killed the guards and the saintess so I find it out of sorts to say we had a reign of terror over the city. Also since we got a reaction from Illya if we romanced her when she found out the truth, it seems a bit unfair that Leon doesn’t get one as well though I do get what you are going for at the ending where it’s rolling through the scenes of everyone reacting to the truth so you might not want to change that.

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What I mean is a bit different. Like, the character I play doesn’t really hold a grudge to Leon or others. Has already said that he forgave Leon.

It’s a grudge against Ante specifically. Being watched waay back in the camp, getting annoyed by her and perhaps even threatening her.

Then that debacle in temple where, from what I understood anyway, she catches onto your plan and causes you to get caught, though I only played the charm path where you lie them about injury so it might be different on other paths, and then the whole thing at the end. I am thinking that there is plenty here to develop a grudge towards her specifically even if you decided to go forgiveness route in general.

A true middle-ground could be many things. Simply staying aside and letting them fend for themselves if one possible one. Helping them defeat the threat, save the kingdom and then killing them is another. Just helping them though, however reluctantly, doesn’t sound like a middle-route unless you get to have some kind of revenge/satisfaction for what was done to you. Not that any of these are what I want to play as. I’ll probably go full forgiveness, with snide comments and if given opportunity, kill a certain character. All the satisfaction of revenge with the fluffiness of forgiveness.

Sounds logical too. Character doesn’t want to hate their friend, but will instead direct all that hatred towards the person beside their friend with whom they had a semi-antagonistic relationship anyway.

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Oh you definitely put her through quite a bit. And yet, I’m feel like Leon might have gotten put through the worse when compared to her (and I say this as someone who is mainly romancing Illya). At least Illya and Saine could take some comfort in the fact their faith in MC was not in vain and they did their best to try helping MC escape death. And Illya’s last words to a MC who is in a romance with her can be that of love, which can be echoed back by the MC themselves (which my MC did. And it hurt. But he wanted to at least be able to say the one truth he could out loud).

Leon though?

His lack of faith in MC (while understandable) was what ultimately got them killed. His last words were to tell his friend/lover that he intended to have them executed and possibly even called them a demon to their face. He went into that cell never intending to listen to them, but to get his own emotions out on MC, who unfortunately had no way to truly defend or explain themselves. Had Leon kept a cool enough head, not allowed himself to be swept away by the emotional high of the people, and listened to the other members of White Fang, there may have been a chance he could have discovered the truth himself much sooner with their help. But he didn’t; and in his choice to burn MC, he too burned the bridges he had with his brother and Illya and may not even be able to step foot near Aunt Bess’ place without receiving a frying pan to the face.. Now Leon has to live with the fact that his hands are the most stained with MC’s blood and he’s (right now) alone on a throne since his choice had heavily damaged his relationships with the former White Fang members (which probably gets especially awkward since Saine and him are technically sharing a space).

I really feel the most sorry Leon because of all that burden. I could only imagine just how hard it hit him when he got that letter and how haunted he got from remembering the last words he ever said to MC. Yet such consequences were ones Leon undeniably called upon himself the moment he sealed MC’s fate and just as his reasons for heavily believing MC to be a cruel, murderous demon at the time were understandable, so too is the price he has to pay for his actions and why some close to him now keep their distance. I do consider it Leon’s saving grace that once he knew the truth, he did not attempt to hide it in any way and did his own part in making sure the stain on MC’s name was wiped (although a bit too late).

I am very curious to see how following interactions may play out with her after MC wakes up from their nap. She had her reasons for believing the worse of MC and was one of the ones that probably argued the strongest for MC’s execution, but at the same time she was always inclined to have doubts on MC too (which would probably explain why she had not looked into the matter deeper despite being a spy; she probably felt like she had seen enough) and much like Leon, had no intentions of ever really listening to them from the looks of it. Now Ante is aware of the truth and…well, yeah that might get a tad awkward for a royal spy to be in the same place as the MC. I wonder what her relationship in particular is like now with Illya and Saine; she did after all prevent the two from saving MC from the execution depending on certain choices.

Now onto other opinions:

the opening of the story alone had caught my interest when I first came across it. I was so curious about what was going on, watching MC being walked to their execution and seeing the different emotions being directed toward them. On one hand, I was seeing the public eager to see MC burned for whatever they were accused of, yet on the other hand, the soldiers didn’t treat MC all that roughly as they set up the preparation for the burning (I am not sure if that was due to the soldiers doing the tasks actively choosing against being cruel to MC in their final moments or if it was a direct order from Leon not to handle MC roughly). The king had little affection for the MC at that point and purposely had the execution be a public affair, and yet held back from making even bigger show of the matter by simply proceeding with the burning without a speech. I was at the edge of my seat curious to see how it all the past events unfold into the present time and especially loved watching it play out as MC’s life flashing before their eyes.

And by the end of it? My heart broke for everyone involved except for Sister, she can sit on a pile of hot coals. Feel like the experience will be quite scarring for my MC once the resurrection takes places and some notable parts of him were scorched in that fire (like the softer parts of his personality). I don’t think he’ll hold back from being a lot more curt with Leon (who he sees as not being sincere in his claim that he trusted MC) and DEFINITELY will be much more harsh and impatient if he ever has to interact with Ante (who he’d probably mock as being a poor spy who failed to find the truth of the matter due to be blinded by her unwavering negative bias toward him) after the event.

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It’s true lol Aunt Bess might kick Leon’ ass if he ever meets her (even after MC’ resurrection)
:joy_cat::smile_cat::smirk_cat: It’ll be hilarious if there will be a scene of her threatening the warrior King and him getting scared for executing MC :roll_eyes::smirk_cat::joy_cat:

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I just finished the demo and I did chose Leon as my RO.

The amount of whump I felt…

The angst…

I just can imagine how guilty and self-blaming Leon is.

This is perfection for me. Thank you.

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I’m with this person 120%
I wouldn’t mind if that heartbreaking react at the end get expanding more. Yeah, I think its good for the story romance and character to have more react option, like shy, bold, or… Tsundere?
Hahaha, but it’s your story I just wanna give a piece of my mind. I’m looking foward for more :confounded: :laughing: