A Drop of Night (WiP) (Demo Uploaded 04/11/2017)

Modern day endearment is so fascinating. We use cuss words to describe our friends. So strangely fascinating.

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Jacky… Jacky …Jacky… I want those abilities.

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But what if you had to deal with someone’s sometimes incomprehensible voice talking in your ear the entire time too? :blush:

@AAO let’s just call it a draw and say you both did great.

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Oh my god. The things you do to us.

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The prologue is now complete! :tada:

It’s currently at 14.065 words and as of today I’ve moved on to full time editing and private testing.

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Cool.


freaks out internally

Jokes aside, that was quite fast. Congrats.

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That’s a lot of words, alright.

Questions about Casey. Would her power allow her to toss vehicles like she would a fast ball and once it leaves her hand would it fly that same speed as a 1-2 ton projectile? And lets say she’s being shot at, could she project her power to her entire body, so that the instant a bullet touches her flesh it could be turned to be as brittle as say a mud ball, etc and thus keeping her unharmed? Just wondering these as the thoughts crossed my mind going back over the character bios. If so, she could be an awesome bad ass woman.

Looking forward to when you make the demo public. Can’t wait to try out this awesome work.

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Whoa, whoa, whoa. Calm down, she ain’t that powerful yet.

But yes, let’s say she threw a baseball at you. If she altered its weight just as it was leaving her hand to, say, 5kg, you’d be getting hit by that (once all the changes to its trajectory, speed, etc caused by that change in weight had taken hold). So, while not an easy power to use, it is a very interesting one to work with.

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@Ylva Is it actually possible that we could make sentient creatures with our powers? I read the link you put above for the darkness manipulation, and I read that it could be a thing.

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Nice, versatile powers are a favorite of mine. They have so much potential if used correctly. Here’s hoping that by the end of the story she becomes or close to that powerful lol.

Edit - Also Smiley has lots of potential too. She can pretty much be able to liquefy brains or cause heads to explode in the future. The Cadwells have mass potential.

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No, you may not create sentient creatures out of the darkness.

I did no such thing :confused:


Indeed.

Oh sorry, I meant in the popular links thingy. http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Darkness_Manipulation
I’m sorry if I assumed wrong, it’s just that in the link I read that it was a possible branch of the power. Sorry again :persevere:

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'Tis quite alright.

And also, I just noticed I didn’t answer your previous question; my bad :sweat_smile:

No, that isn’t the source. I just went “Hey. Umbrakinesis. That shit be edgy and cool.”, and then built off it :laughing:

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Ohhh I see, thank you for the clarification. I’ll just happily wait then to see how you built the MC’s powers, good luck with your story!

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I am very intrigued.

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I love how my post that was flagged for being a somewhat… Well i dun even know, Is still getting hearts/likes xD. Either Some of ya don’t like humour or… Well i don’t know.

(PS. Can’t wait for the Prologue! So many woooords X3)
((Also expect me to laugh internally If this post gets flagged too xD))