@Wildthorn_23 @Joao_Victor Try it now, hopefully it works now? I might’ve confused the code, though a quicktest didn’t tell me anything. Then again, I should’ve tested it myself.
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Went back a save and nope, still has an error.
Probably will have to redo the game, I’ll do it later
Unfortunately, I don’t know how to fix this as I can’t figure out what’s causing it in the first place. I must be doing something wrong, but I’m at a loss.
From what I saw, the last choice have been greyed out since the start of the conversation, and my personality have been like this, if it helps.
Okay, did not know this (or if I did, I forgot).
For future reference for myself and anyone here, I had *disable_reuse before each choice. Well, apparently that (and *hide_reuse) traps players in a loop. There needs to be at least one choice to prevent the loop.
SO. It better work- please work.
Also, I love the full hostility, that’s funny. Thank for for showing your stats, as I’m uncertain of flavor text requirements.
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Yeah I was concerned about a stat reaching to 100 so easily, normally it stays around 80s or 90s. I remember an IF which my stats went above 100 (without cheating btw), then I had to modify my stat because it was crashing the game
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I really liked the update and I’m loving all the interactions with the team, their dynamic is 
fantastic . And ngl, I also felt a bit bad for keeping Jace at arm’s length and seeing him only as a neighbor when he was that happy just for finally getting MC’s number :')
anyway, some bugs I've found
It should be ‘she’
I didn’t flirt with Min-Ji, so I was a bit confused that Maples was already planning their wedding lol
It should be ‘she’ and ‘her’ respectively
It should be ‘he’
It should be ‘his’
(English isn’t my first language so just ignore this one if it’s actually right, but) maybe it should be ‘chest’?
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Why are so many brackets… backwards?? Wth was I doing?
I will have those fixed tomorrow! I think I need to have my laptop closer 
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I’m glad that you were able to enjoy it, despite the errors, and yes, “chest” is as applicable as “breast”. It’s used to be more specific rather than just say “pinned to his chest”. After all, men have breasts too! 
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Oh I didn’t know that it could be used to make a description be more specific, I was a bit undecided in including the last one but I decided to mention just in case 
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Don’t worry! I’m glad you did. 
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Following the others’ reports, now that first choice (“Tell me where you wandered off to. Specifically.”) can be looped, but the last one (I’m not sure what else I could ask […]) can’t, so players can get trapped if they select the first one as the last one twice.
I’m confused 
. The last one is meant to finish off the questions once everything else is chosen. Should I make the final option clearer so it’s easier to understand that it ends the scene or…? 
I’m sorry, I don’t understand.
I believe the problem is that the first option can be selected infinitely, when it should be just once. The loop makes the last option unselectable. That makes unware players stuck.
I think… I will just remove the code and leave it as normal choices. I am very confused and admittedly frustrated with this bit. It shall be done tomorrow.
Spoilers for Attack On Titan
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Hello again, thank you for pointing out the mistakes. This makes me look so sloppy, ugh.
Regarding Maples’s “wedding” commentary...
…this is most likely because you chose #I barely heard a word s/he (Maples) said. I’m too busy admiring his/her (Min-Jun/Ji) eyes. Or his/her face. Or whatever part of him/her. Consider me hypnotized. 
(Flirt)
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I actually picked the one where MC jokes if they’re Royalty, but I was looking in the code and I think I figured out why I got that scene.
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I picked the ‘When I like looking at something, I commit it to memory’ option when Bradley mentioned that MC was staring. And that’s the stat check that happens before that scene:
*if ((m_response = “flirt”) and (gender = “female”)) or (gender = “male”)
Since my MC is a man then it would be triggered even though he didn’t flirt with Min-Ji (since it checks if the MC flirted with Min-Ji if they’re a woman but don’t do the same if the MC is a man)
I get it now. Okay, I just removed the gender bit part of the *if because, really, I probably didn’t need it anyway. So, it should be fine now. I didn’t realize it would work like that!
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Found a little writing mistake in Chapter 4 
:
It should be “he” not “hhe”
“Gritty. Tastes like concrete. Or stone.” He looks like hhe ate a rotten hard-boiled egg…
With Jaylynn at the hospital when she sees Min. Should be “him” not “his”
“I wanna meet his!” She giggles then, sitting taller. “And ask if he’s been in anything—” I highly doubt that.
I loved everything of your story (especially the characters and the subtle and not so subtle humor 
)
Found and fixed! I’ll forgive myself for those- Easy to miss, and I suspected I’d use the wrong code at least a few times.
Thank you for reading! I’m glad you liked it
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