Vendetta (WIP) (Ash + Rin Hangout Updated on 20th August 2024) [384K Words Total])

I acctually dont think its any of the ROs and if it has to be somebody that weve acctually seen something of in the story newton acctually fits the bill the best that i can recall. Been a bit since my last playthrough and there is if i recall correctly a history between are dad and him but its more in line of the connection with the MCs mother mirage.

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Well, if it is him, Newton doesnt have to have a history with Viktor because we know he has one with the MC’s mother. It could be that he had feelings for her and I can’t imagine he liked that she hitched up with mob/vigilante trash. And then she gave both Vik AND their newborn child up for fame. And that could’ve been the moment that both disillusioned and broke him.

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I enjoyed the latest update, its a bit slow but the writing is good. It feels like a real story and not a cheesy “superhero story”.

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Ughhh well thats why there are many paths besides the superhero route, so maybe that is why u don’t feel is a only just a superhero story

no what I meant was Vendetta does not feel like a cheesy story unlike the other stories that are available here

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Will there be any adult content?

Lots of violence, no smut is planned so far.

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I can’t wait for more chapters of this storyline its so amazing to read ^^

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broo gravity manipulation is broken lmao, its peak potential can reach a blackhole

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To be honest, any superpower is broken if you continue to escalate its level. Pyrokinesis? Burn whole city/planet. Precognition? You will always miles ahead of your current and future opponents in planning, combat and negotiations. Supermen pack? Fly like Omniman to wipe out nations in seconds.

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Yeah I use shadow control ability because its more cool and edgy (also I am a batman fan since I am 6). Gravity manipulation is better at some situations, shadow control is better at other situations.

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Telepathy? Become Heartbreak c:

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Of you think like that, you could use telepathy to stop people hearts by controling their unconsus part of the brain or make them have seizures by overloading their sensory sistem, or in other words it would mean you could kill superman with just a thought. Dont think to much about superpowers it will ruin them if you think hard enough

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So kinda kat to discussing who nemesis is but i want to say while we dont know the person’s exact power it has something to do with guns, so the only person who can possibly fit the bill is newton.

I think the shadow powers are actually less edgy lol, can’t do shit without thinking

"Awww WHOOSE A GOOD BOY! Now fetch me their souls! "

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Well depends on the POV I guess. When you see shadows as pet your POV makes sense

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THE GUN WAS UNLOADED THE WHOLE TIME I WAS POINTING IT AT THE COMMISSIONER?!?!

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I mean to be fair you can’t get any info if you accidentally dye the pool with his grey matter…

And its not like you went in there expecting a fight

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You are literally sent there to kill him

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