I really like how this story is going, and I love the characters so much! I know you said you would make the flirting options more clearly, but can I also suggest shy flirting options as well please, if you haven’t already thought of implementing it
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I’m loving the story, every time my mc doesn’t get chosen I breathe a huge sigh of relief. I’d imagine if I were to rule there’d be fireballs raining down from the sky. I love the sibling bonding moments chaotic sibling energy it feels really natural. Spent a long time on this without realizing, got really immersed.
p̶a̶r̶t̶i̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶d̶u̶e̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶r̶e̶g̶r̶e̶t̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶c̶h̶o̶i̶c̶e̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶r̶e̶s̶t̶a̶r̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ a̶g̶a̶i̶n̶ a̶n̶d̶ a̶g̶a̶i̶n̶
Sincerely hoping the sibling group won’t fall apart, but I can feel a dreading sensation at that thought…
I’m intrigued both sides in the current war stating different information about Prince Francis’s wife and what the four horses King Charles gave to the four heirs represent and how that will come into play for future events.
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You know the feature that says becoming the king/queen or staying as a prince/princess just how big is the difference in terms of gameplay for that feature going to be?
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Unwanted warrior cancelled😔 its like rainbow six patriots and final fantasy versus XIII over again
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Really enjoyed reading this!! 
Especially when it switches POVs to the other characters.chefs kiss 
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i love it !! i really like the plot & characters 
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Hello love the story so far just wondering if youd be able to add 1 or 2 more save slots cuz theres so much i want to explore lol
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I just played the demo and it was really good! I’m really interested to see how the war will develop and how my choices will impact it. Also really interested in seeing who the characters that are open to a poly route are.
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Me who can’t decide between Astryn and Revna… 
I was wondering what happened to The Unwanted Warrior, very sad to see it die, but also very excited to watch this one grow!
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What about Xavier’s sister or the thief girl as possible ROs?
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MC and her aren’t dating so she’s not cheating. All they did was share one kiss which she wants you to forget about as of right now. Besides all she’s doing is flirting, she’s already said she hasn’t slept with them or anything.
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It really has been one of the best Wips I have played, I really hope you can finish it 
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Wow I loved this demo so much! I loved The Unwanted Warrior too and am saddened to hear about the cancellation and circumstances surrounding it, but I absolutely adored this game so at least one good thing came out of it! I think this game has AMAZING potential for a series, and I would unhesitatingly pay for any number of books in a hypothetical series! There’s so many places you can go with the story and world, I think! Clara and Astryn compete for my heart, in the end I think I will go for Astryn though, simply because the enemies to lovers trope is just urrgghhh toooo good haha. I got the ending where my MC became king and I antagonized Richard throughout the demo, I loved his reaction hehe. I do have several questions though @NutellaQueen
My first question is, how much of the story is included within the current demo, do you think? And what is the word count? Because for some reason I am simultaneously getting vibes that the story is nearing the end, but also just beginning, so I wanted to know what percentage you think the story is currently at. My other question was, can we still romance Astryn even if we don’t want to relinquish the throne to Erwan? Say, if we just allied with Erwan and the South instead of making him king of it all.
Well those are my questions and my thoughts on the story, this is an amazing story you’ve crafted here and I can’t, can’t, wait to see it in its full form!!! Instant bookmark!!
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If lena is possible to romance in the future I’ll go for her, xavier is awesome so I hope his sister is like him, the guy is the best either as your non-blood-related bro, or your boyfriend, even after getting unjustly imprisoned the man never stops being your friend, and he’s always kind, and if you choose to help him escape he swores loyalty to you and promises to help you in the war even after all your father did to him
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Revna clearly likes her freedom and likes to do whatever she wants without anyone giving her shit, which kudos to her, woman power really, it doesn’t mean you have to stand it as a romantic partner, for sex? She’s pretty attractive if that’s all you care about, for giving you a heir or a romantic relationship? Hell no, why? Because to be happy in an open relationship like that you have to have the same desires and needs, if you fall in love with her you wouldn’t be able to take the fact that she constantly sees other people out of your mind, it would destroy your heart, so you would have to be polygamous too, which I’m not, and I’d not feel comfortable in that setting in real life, there’s also the fact that you are king(or not) and you may be father to a bastard(meaning that the child may not even be yours) and yeah, I’m kind of an asshole like that
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Your not in a relationship with her or committed to each other, all you can do is flirt and share one kiss. Just because she’s flirting, which isn’t serious and she doesn’t care about them, with someone doesn’t mean she won’t be faithful in a monogamous relationship. There’s literally 0 information she’s polygamous, all she’s doing is flirting with some one else besides the MC who, again, she’s only shared a kiss with and isn’t dating.
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No, it’s not required.
I don’t want to touch that game ever again 
I hope you’re okay! Take care 
I didn’t want to keep you guys wait for updates.
They will not develop feelings for each other.
Okay, why are you so cute? I can’t handle this much cuteness
Not books, but I got inspiration from some shows such as Game of Thrones, Vikings and even Attack on Titan.
I’m listening to AOT soundtracks while writing the game 
Of course 
Huge difference. If MC becomes the king/queen, they will have to make very tough decisions as a leader. You see, the demo has three endings: MC as the king/queen, Atheris as the queen and Richard as the king. So, I’m writing three different paths.
Of course 
Interesting, because Revna is one of the ROs that wouldn’t agree to be in a polygamous relationship
Oh, I will. Since I’ve graduated from university and quit my job, writing this game is the only thing I’m doing right now
Hmm, I think it will be a series
The story is at 50%.
The Word count is 145k.
Yes.
It depends on how you treat him. If you’re kind, he’s kind. If you’re hostile, well…
RUN.
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So sad to hear about 'The Unwanted Warrior 
may its memory be remembered and not forgotten.
And now on to happier news… Hooray!!! A new wip from one of my favorite Story Writers!
Love! And I mean love, the story!
But once I reached the end of the demo I was like what 
… … …(loading) that’s it!?
That cliffhanger was beautiful, but it also slapped me, in the face not once but not twice but,…
I’m not even sure how many times but the questions burning to be answered slapped me. Now I have so many questions still to be answered. 
So instead of swamping the questions upon you here are most burning questions:
1.) What’s happening with my romance now? I feel lost without my answered question if my Clara loves me or my bro who I know I might be like a green hat situation but love knows, know bounds ok.
2.) Is this the end of the demo as whole or is there going to be more or it posted with the rest on steam & Google play to be sold or is there a book 2 to be made later?
But all that a side glad you’re back and loved the story. 
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Wait are there poly romances?
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Ok just finished reading some of the comments so alot of my questions seem to have been answered 
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