The Rise of the Ochita [WIP] CHAPTER 7 (1/3 complete) NOW OUT (68K WORDS) 17-09-2024

It means a lot to me, thank you! I hope you like the final chapters as well!

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How many chapters will the book have ?

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There will be 8 Chapters + the Epilogue which will be a whole Chapter by itself.

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Will you make any more historical IFs?

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Well, the plan is, or at least has been for some time now, if this is well received, to write a sequel to the story, but that is still far ahead in the future. My main focus now is to be able to write down and finish this story, with all the different endings, and hopefully the end product will be something that most of you shall enjoy, something that you play from start to finish and think “time well spent”.

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So, finally after months and months of waiting, as I promised, the third subroute of Chapter 7 “Learning to Fly”, is out!!!

Right now, it is the only playable option after the end of Chapter 6. The other two routes are still being written, so bear with me…

Link for the demo in the original post, and as always, thank you all for bearing with me and helping! I receive all your messages and I thank each and every one of you. Let’s get this feedback rollingggggg!!!

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Glad to see a new update

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i like this story i think romance is very rapid to the beginning. we haven’t many times for developping feelings… but i want try again😅

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Had lots of fun going through the last chapters, my chief to be is all about diplomacy and leadership so whenever we get pulled into combat damn those are tense moments.

The English and the French and their actions during these era with their rampant colonialism are the stuff that makes nightmares so really trying to navigate such a complex conflict in favour of those who suffered the most and suffer to this very day is a titanic task.

My plan right now is for my MC to take refuge in the Hagots’ lands after the infamous confrontation and just magically through the power of diplomacy get ourselves an alliance to face the colonisers at least for now as a stronger front. That of course won’t be enough but it is a start.

Beyond that Melanie is truly a sweetie but Seneka doesn’t fall behind either, great ROS that portray the period accurately, meeting Washington was surprising but a nice historical wink even if I don’t care much about the figure.

Great job mate, keep pushing for the rest of the story, best of luck!

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Much appreciated! Thank you for your kind words!

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Rise of the Uchiha?

nice I dont think there’s been a ninja story for like a decade.

Edit: oh

Hey is this gonna be an AU story where the war can turn out differently or are the natives just screwed no matter what?

Wasn’t Washington only a regimental commander? And wasnt the whole war basically his fault? Why is he a shown holding a rank and responsibilities he never held? Actually, come to think of it, I don’t remember him being an actual commissioned military officer in the royal army but a militia regimental colonel.

In regards to the first question, welll…you gotta wait and see haha

Now, I have already stated that my work is “a historically inspired” IF. Certain artistic liberties have been taken. Cause I don’t recall a tribe named Ochita either in the Iroquois Confederacy :wink:

I hope you liked the story so far!

Regards

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Can’t unsee Stefanos Tsitsipas in Jacob Smith’s face.

So, it has already been two months since the release of the last update. How did you like it? Any reccomendations?

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Well I particularly liked it back then, the different set of options you gave at the end if chapter 5 was it? Were quite intriguing, allying with the Hagots(our old tribal enemy) had my quite excited regarding the interactions we will get, not to discredit the other options of course this is as of Noe in my current diplomatic playthrough how I will go about it.

Recommendations? I would say keep doing what you do best, the romances have been really nice so far so getting more scenes with our sweethearts is appreciated, more conflict and sticky situation for our people and tribe as the chapters go on our whole position is far more challenging so of course the writing must reflect that. Beyond that no complaints, love your style and the historical fiction piece you deliver mate!

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I would like to send everyone my heartfelt wishes for a happy New Year 2025, that shall bring you all health, peace, prosperity, lots of success and everything you long for! Thank you for supporting this project!

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Just to make you aware, Dashingdon hosting will be closing soon so I would recommend moving this to cogdemos or uploading a compiled html file:

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Thank you for the notice! I was really saddened to hear that Dashingdon is shutting down. I want to let everyone know the game has been uploaded on cogdemos.ink. You can play be clicking on the following link.

https://cogdemos.ink/play/giorgos/the-rise-of-the-ochita

Please let me know if you encountered any bug. There shouldn’t be any, but I am not familiar with the cogdemos platform yet.

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Its a shame isn’t it?

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Hey everyone! I know it is taking me too long but work hasn’t been letting me do much of writing. I am hopeful I can release the 2nd route of the second chapter during the Easter holidays. I hope you all have a great weekend!

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