Any wip with game of thrones feel is already good in my book and this Is one of it
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there is 3 thing I love
1-low fantasy
2-court intrigue
3-a dark setting
this wip contains all of them I am hopeful about this wip
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Wow, Dragon Age and Game of thrones, my two favorite franchises and both are inspirations to this wip! Looks good so far and can’t wait to read more!
Our mother doesn’t seem to be from one of the 8 noble houses, which house is she from?
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I’m glad you are interested in my WIP 
As for Merindah’s house, she belongs to a minor house under the banner of the Dracarions, her house has had several queens for the Dracarions l, the thing here is thr Dracarions ever so rarely have had marriage alliances with the great noble houses, they often do it with the ones under their banners as to avoid you know a war for the throne deeming one heir worthier and the houses supporting whichever one they would benefit more of.
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Please, never stop writing .
100/10 .
I am alight with anticipation ! Super excited to see how the rest of the story and choices branch out ! ! ! !
Thank You <3
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Believe me I will not, this story has been with me for years and now I have the opportunity to expand their character’s stories. Sure it would take time because if there’s a scene I don’t like at all I rewrite from the beginning.
Anyway expect the full chapter 1 and part of two in late July or early August, I’m basically multitasking with this and school finals.
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I am glad to hear that. Normally I was using the forum without a account main reason why I open a account is because of this wip. I also have a question, how long game will be can we expect 300k words?
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300k or even more, as I’m not sure how long will be, I’m constantly adding more scenes. But yeah It’ll be safe to assume the word count for book 1 will be around 300k.
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Man i love our grandmother already the way she roasts the king calling him ugly as a baby was hilarios
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Zhera is a very expressive Queen for sure, glad you liked her, honestly she’s one of my favourite characters to write.
You’ll shall find more of her background in the next update, as she’s going to be one of the main role models from childhood helping shape their personality and the likes.
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This looks like got many dracula inspired story being in medieval with dragon, impaler, bloodthirst etc. Pretty cool
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I would really like some more interactions with my twin. It feels like I see more of everyone else at the moment. Not sure if you plan on adding low-magic to this world but I was thinking of a scene where the twins would be making another sketch. Arlen could have recently recieved a gift of rare or special materials rumored to have magical properties. Maybe the images look like they move when watched near flickering candlelight but no one believes them or they keep it as a secret between the two of them. I think that’s cute.
For Drystan we could probably plan a strawberry tart heist in the kitchens and fall asleep in the gardens after stuffing ourselves with pastry lol. Maybe have that lead to us getting scolded by mum when she see how filthy our clothes and hair are(mud, twigs,leaves etc)
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Yeah, Vlad Tepes was one of the inspirations for Bhaltair as well as King John II of France you’ll find out why is a spoiler soon enough.
Many thanks for your idea, I will certainly include a Drystan adventure, I’ll love that for sure.
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My only hope this not end up abandoned like other game of thrones inspired wip. Thank you for the demo it’s pretty good
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don’t worry I’ll never abandon it, this story in a sense is already finished on the specific route I had designed, now I’ll just have to expand all of that, add more scenes and work my way through the stats, it’ll be a lot to work on, sure but I’ll do my best.
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I’m glad to hear that. Stay healthy
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Great game but there spelling errors in the prologue
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Mates just so you know the demo update is up, but is not the full chapter, as in the current update there’s a code error that just doesn’t allows me to, like, if you have a female mc she will never go to her needlework lessons, and I have just given up with it and uploaded it anyway, so please help if you can, because I’m on my writing momentum and just today I wrote almost 10k for ch 3, but I’ll focus more on the mistakes of this.
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I mean like, the valley girl narration got kind of like, annoying
Also didn’t use the word “literally” enough to be like, an authentic valley girl narration
The rest of it was…okay? I didn’t hate it.
“Sir Baldwin, who has a shiny bald head”
So sir Baldone is the bald one. Easy to remember.
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Its fine. At least u have something to show for this update even if it’s bugging out like that. Honesty I wasn’t really a fan of that scene since it felt wrong forcing it on a female mc since not everyone is the same so maybe it’s a blessing in disguise. Good luck with everything and I will point out any typos or bugs I find.
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