Hello I love this media and after reading a lot of the awesome novels and WIPs here I decided I want to write something myself. I tried learn somethings about writing (hellofutureme is a good youtuber with an awesome book for that BTW). I posted something in the interest check thread and I’m happy with the feedback I got. Now I have the problem that I’m in vacation and can’t write because I don’t have my PC. I don’t have very much to show but something is bothering me. I want to know whether I’m just self-conscious or if something is wrong with the way I write. But I’m anxious if I post to early the people who read it won’t like it and stop caring about it. I don’t want waste this opportunity because the first impression is the most important. So what do you think. Should I post it and use the feedback or should I figure it out on my own and don’t waste the first impression. The problem is the scene bothers me hard enough that I can’t write more.
TL:DR should I post the (4000 words) beginning to improve it or should I wait.