it is verry nice, but I don’t like any of the ROs. I am so sad. could you please put some new ROs? it will be much nicer, if you do so. vore exambele a Bisiunissmen? thank you.
Sorry vore any mistakes their but English is not my main Language.
i dont find kalena ad all mean so far liked her straigt forward and knows what she want my feelings atleast to her
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I’m sorry, I don’t mean this to be rude in any way, but is this a serious request?
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Yay, very glad to hear it! Especially since she’s here to stay, as you might have been able to tell 
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I’m obssesed, your IF are always such a masterpieces <3
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Thank you so much 
damn this is actually pretty good
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i’m already so obsessed with this <33 the interview format is so fun but also so ominous lmao. kalena going from comparing my mc to a haunting fairy who doesnt even seem real (which is honestly exactly the vibe i was imagining for my girl and i loved that bit so much i instantly had to tell my friend and send them the link to the game) to then the comment about when people found out about mc’s past… im so locked in!!!
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Yes, exactly! The interview format is being used so well to build tension.
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Absolutely loved the update! Super excited for more!
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I like Kalena‘s express…it make me pride！
But be honestly，knowing that the band is destined to fall，my heart is broken💔
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Not every band can last forever like Rolling Stones though.
Like Kurt Cobain once said, it’s better to burn out than to fade away
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Yay thank you!!
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Well they definitely went out with a bang
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Promising. I love the idea of using an interview format. I really want to know where the story is going.
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Well, I think I never said this but putting the end in the beginning and then showing you the past is genius design (just my opinion!!)
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Hey, look there are some beautiful pieces!
(then let you know why they are broken)
Now you feel sad and can’t do anything! Because it is over! Long before you find them!
(smiles like a demon)
After typing all of the above I leave my laptop and then confession for a second 
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Oh wow that is so poetic… Not to be “I’m 14 and this is deep” but I love that; it’s exactly what’s happening here.
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Holy hell, always love it when a WIP pulls me in like a long lost lover.
I can’t wait for more, thank you for the hard work!
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Damn…this is great! Also succeeds at a few things where, most importantly having me feel like the bandmates are actual friends, the other prominent music WIP around here does not quite achieve that feeling.
Also seems to mercifully go lighter on the angst in spite of having an mc with an even more troubled past.
The interview with the vampire narrative structure but thus far done better, imho.
Pretty saying but I’m sure money-wise it isn’t better. A gradually diminishing income is preferable to no income at all. Ah, well at least mc here does seem to have a college education so maybe they did find something else productive, at least I hope they did.
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Omg sameeeeeee, the trauma from 7’s route is too much for me. No wonder the author said reader discretion is advised and take a break if you need to lol. I’ll probably jump into it…when the book is completed and i know theres a gauranteed happy ending route 
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