[New Game] The Trouble with Wumples


#1

The Trouble with Wumples by Horace Torys
A new planet, a new language, a new life. Just going to supper with a friend can bring total disaster when dealing with the local culture and wildlife. How will you adapt? Find out in this bite-sized sci-fi story.

http://troublewithwumples.webs.com/

The first ChoiceScript flash fiction? Comments welcome.


#2

I think the game’s great. It’s length allows you to find all the endings in 5 minutes, which is both a pro and a con. It allows you to experiment, but the number of endings were too few in my opinion.

Still, it managed to make me laugh =D


#3

So cute! Love the happy ending, ending. Well written short game!


#4

Good game really short though.


#5

Wow. I cant wait to read it when I get home!


#6

Nice game. Very cute…


#7

It is really cute.


#8

One of the best user made games I’ve read thus far.


#9

… Horace buddy… I wasn’t feeling it… Maybe its just me … I felt there wasn’t enough back ground story and info… lol but for a short story it was fun…


#10

B-) 4/5* for me… overall I enjoied it…


#11

5/5* for me! :smiley:


#12

Thanks for the positive feedback, all. Yes, it was intended to be short and cute. I actually wrote it for a class in one evening, as a joke for my wife who was taking the class with me. She can’t stand to see anything suffer…


#13

Small but good.


#14

nice game but very short :stuck_out_tongue:


#15

Nice game, I liked it. :smiley:


#16

the happy ending is when you eat the mother wrumpet for chasing you down the streets right? I mean what could be better than revenge.


#17

@CommunistSam where you been at bro? :stuck_out_tongue:


#18

Weirdcute :slight_smile:


#19

hehehe. Short and sweet.