March 2024's Feedback Exchange Thread

[AranaLim]

• User Name AranaLim
• Author Post
• Name of Project: The Last Riftwarden
• Genre: High fantasy
• Time commitment: No requirement- as long as there is a review, I am good.
• Feedback that I am seeking: generic bugs, typos, the flow of scenes and grammar . Especially the last one, because I am not a native speaker.
• Link:

[WIP] The Last Riftwarden (Act 1 updated)

[title] I’ve begun work on my new game The Last Riftwarden. In it, you play as a guardian who specialises in slaying monsters spawned by a place called the Rift. After surviving a mysterious incident that wiped out the rest of your order, your goal is to muster a resistance before the Riftspawns mow down the world. Joined by a warrior from the West, a noble from the Eastern dukedom and a literal skeleton from a time long forgotten, you must deal with distrusting mortals, unhelpful gods, and qui…

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