And now, I’ll share an excerpt of my own from chapter 2 of my main WIP. I’m pretty sure that it isn’t in the demo version yet, but even if it is, I’d like to share it anyway. So this is a scene that invokes the main conflict of chapter 2:
I wish you all sucess in all of your endeavours in the rest of this month.
Ethan's quest.
Ethan peeks around the side of the large doorway that serves as the entrance to classroom 13. He watches as the members of the student council pass through the large mirror situated in the centre of the room, as if it were a wall of water.
Ethan ends up surprised at his own indifference to the spectacle he just witnessed. In truth, he already knew. He had seen Emma’s hand sticking out the bottom of the mirror after all. Still, nothing could quite prepare him to see a group of students walk inside a mirror as if it were nothing.
He checks the hallway behind him, ensuring he was not being followed. "Nothing but moss…" He muttered to himself.
He slips inside of classroom 13. Feeling rather underwhelmed, he stand in the middle of the empty classroom, and faces the dusty mirror. He looks down, at the now dry stain that could be mistaken for rust, before stepping into the mirror himself.
“I will avenge you Emma…” Ethan says, fists clenched, as he passes through the glass.
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Ethan emerges on the other side of the mirror, just in time to see the back of ${pcname} as
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the entrance to Speculo.
“That’s the one then…” Ethan thought to himself.
Adrienne looked up, upon hearing the distinctive “plop” that signifies someone passing through a mirror. When she saw Ethan, she immediately stood in front of the mirror that connected to Speculo, arms raised.
“Someone’s a little lost isn’t he Ethan?” Adrienne says to him, in her distinct tone that almost sounds like purring.
Upon hearing the commotion, Sumira looks up from her laptop. “Oh crap…” She says in a tone that was definitely meant to be quiet.
“Get them back here now.” Adrienne thought, so that Ethan wouldn’t hear it.
“I’m on it! I’m on it!” Sumira yelled, running into the corner and holding her head.
“Get out of my way Adrienne, please. I’m just trying to find out what happened to my sister.” Ethan says to her, in a pleading tone.
Adrienne stood her ground, but she knew if Ethan charged at her, she wouldn’t be able to do much. Her power was not an offensive one. She would have to stall for time, for the others to get back. Unless…
“Fine, go through Ethan. Don’t blame me for what happens in there.” She says to him, a wide grin forming on her face.
“What are you doing?” Sumira asked her telepathically.
“Shut it Sumi, I know what I’m doing.” Adrienne thought back.
Ethan was surprised to see Adrienne letting him through. But then he realised why. The mirrors were moving. “It’s been around 30 seconds, so if my instincts are correct, and this is fake, then it’s that one…”
Ethan broke out into a sprint, and headed towards one of the inactive mirrors. Sumira realised what Adrienne had done. But their moods quickly turned shallow as they realised he had seen through Adrienne’s illusion. Ethan ran straight into the mirror, and passed through with an audible “plop”.
“That little…” Adrienne said quietly, clenching her fists.
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Mere moments after Ethan passed through the mirror, you arrive back in the terminal. You discover Adrienne with an annoyed look on her face, and Sumira sat on the floor with her head in her hands.
Riona passes through behind you, “What happened Sumi?” She asks her.
Sumira goes to speak, but Adrienne beats her to it, “Ethan showed up. He saw through my illusions and ran into Speculo” She says to you and Riona, chewing on the end of her finger, while eyeing the mirror that connects to Speculo.
Riona shoots you a worried glance as Jack passes through the mirror behind you. Sumira ends up explaining the situation 3 more times as Jack, Dillion, and Hikari all show up at different times.
“So, what’s the plan Riona?” Dillion asks her, once Sumira has finished explaining for the final time.
Riona is quiet for a moment, seemingly gathering her thoughts, before she speaks.
“If he’s gone into Speculo, then he will face the awakening. No other way of putting it. We’ll have to return for today, we can retrieve him another day.” She says.
“Another day? You want us to just leave?” Dillion yells, but Riona puts her hand up, signalling him to be quiet.
“We know from experience, that interrupting an awakening is a bad idea.” She looks over at Hikari, “Don’t we Hikari?”
Hikari gives a small nod, whilst staring at the floor, but remains silent. Nothing more to say, Dillion heads through the mirror that connects back to Mori with a grunt. Everyone makes to follow him, the Speculo trip seemingly having been ended prematurely.
You go to follow aswell, but you feel a hand on your shoulder, it’s Riona, holding you back. “I need to ask you something, in private.” She says to you.