LUCIDITY: Awakening (WIP- 1/8/21) - not everyone makes it to the afterlife

yeah and don’t forget the romance yelling OUTLOUD! ‘Oh man, you fell on YOUR ASS! HANG ON! I’m COMING TO HELP YOU!’’…

glare and look around yeah, cause that help a lot :smile:

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GHOST! GHOST! GHOST MC! I really like how I could pick my pets and how my MC can trip over their feet and I can feel the second-hand embarrassment.

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Firstly, I’d like to say that as a non-binary lesbian, I really appreciate having a lesbian RO who’s romanceable by non-binary MC :heart:

Secondly, I really like the premise of this game! I’m a big fan of games where we’re trying to figure out MC themselves and the way you’re writing it is really good. I can really feel the anxiety of not remembering yourself and the secondhand embarrassment from falling down in front of the ROs :joy:

Definitely looking forward to future updates!

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I disagree, our experiences with our gender affects how we act and see ourselves, and how society views us. It’s not a matter of simple pronoun change.

But anyway, I really enjoyed this demo, but did you have to hit me with this reality?

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This is weird and it’s making me giddy with excitement.

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Arbor is so cute, I love them already :pleading_face:

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Sounds interesting hope it focuses on story as well as romance not just romance

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Though the romances are a big focus, the MC’s character arc (ie, the story) is going to be central.

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It looks interesting, unfortunately the RO’s wont work for me, tho i kinda understand why make it like this.

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just a typo here!

i love the demo so far! the writing’s a good balance of descriptive and concise, the premise is interesting and the options are hilarious. i’m looking forward to it!

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Wow, I love what you have so far! It’s very interesting and I look forward to reading the rest of it. And if you want to make Salem an RO, you know, I won’t complain…(she owns my heart regardless).

:kissing_heart:

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Hello! This unfortunately is not me announcing the second update- just a patch, as well as a very minor… lore… issue. :sweat_smile: Copied from my tumblr announcement yesterday:

I’ve discovered a fatal error in the most basic building blocks of my world. Sleepwalkers not having souls makes absolutely zero sense for where I want my story to go. Thankfully I’ve caught it now and not three updates down the road, so hopefully my world can still be resuscitated.

I’ve reuploaded the first few chapters with minor fixes and updated my pinned post/forum post to reflect the following changes:

  • Sleepwalkers aren’t born without souls, but without an aura, the thing that binds your soul to your body. This is what allows your soul to wander while your body sleeps.

That is all. Forgive my idiocy. Have a good day.

I’ve also included Chapter 4 with this very small update, which adds the following:

  • You can set your preferred pronouns.
  • You can set your last name.
  • You learn one of the final pieces of the basic premise of the story! (Hint: There’s a reason you were in a graveyard.)
  • You have a very brief look at Nakoa.

That’s all, folks. Let me know what you think!

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I like it! The interactions between the ROs so far was enjoyable, looking forward to this one :slight_smile:

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Haven’t finished yet but I love these:
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:joy: Nonsense - No-nonsense
I love the atmosphere and the writing, reminds me of Neil Gaiman’s work.

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Thank you!! Neil Gaiman is one of my top favourite authors, so I really appreciate the comparison. <3

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My nonsense and awkward mc is go up to the Rooftop. Can’t wait more chapter

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As they should, maple syrup in the best.

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I see you’ve joined 15 minutes ago! WELCOME :dancer::dancer::dancer:

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Thank you :relaxed:

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I loved it! Really intrigued by the premise and I really liked the general vibe + your writing style. I’m already excited for future updates!
(also I, too, fell directly in love with Salem as soon as she rudely refused to make an appointment for my awkward & weird MC :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:)

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