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You’re right. Thank you for reporting this.
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Aw. I thought she was being nastily sarcastic and echoing his phrasing. I liked that. The contempt it indicated fits well with the rest of what we see of her.
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You know, now that’s you’ve pointed it out, I do see it. 
Maybe I’ll leave it the way it is. I’ll have to think on it some more.
Thanks for catching these typos! If you find any more of them would you mind reporting them here: https://forms.gle/ffvbnaW9CfKeHYQ68. It’s a lot easier for me to keep track of that way rather than individual forum posts.
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Monthly Update: July 2025
Hi everyone! Happy July! I have been very hard at work this past month, and I am very happy to report that I’ve been extremely productive this month! The chapter is now over 100k words, which is both frustrating and exciting.
I will be spending the first part of the month finishing the last few scenes of the chapter, and I’m confident I will finish chapter 4 part 1 this month. As soon as I have a release date, I will later you all know, but it will be soon. At the very least Patrons will have it this month, the public release may not be until August.
As always I’ll be around to answer any questions you may have on either Tumblr or the Forum. Have a great month!
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Hey everyone I just wanted to let you know that the Patreon demo has officially been updated! It’s about 128k words of content, and includes chapter 4 part 1 as well as a new skip to new content feature.
In this update you can:
- Age into adulthood
- Investigate your MC’s past
- Have a mishap with your powers
- Attend a funeral
- Have tea with the emrpress
- Meet a new RO
Public demo will be released on August 1. If you don’t want to wait, you can subscribe to either tier of my Patreon.
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The Public Demo is now updated!
See previous posts for what can be done in this chapter. If you find any bugs please report them vis the error report form. Found here or in the intro post.
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Found an small typo.
In chapter 4-1
“We are going to try to cause a vision. You see visions when you sleep, I think we should try and replicate I while you are awake. We don’t need a scrying bowl for that, but I thought one might be useful to improve your focus.”
…replicate it while you sleep,…
Instead of I
Another one.
“Not really,” I say. “But I need decided I need to know what it means bad enough that I’m willing to risk it.”
The first need is not necessary/wrong. (Or depends of this should say. “I need to know”. Or “I decided I need to know”.
“…I never fought with the military in question, so I’ve never the pin in use the way it’s meant to be worn, but I do have a good idea what it is.”
I think it meant to say. “I’ve never seen the pin in use…” Or at least it seems that a word is missing.
A bit spoilery
Now she’s just gone, and I don’t what to do
Perhaps it should say. "… I don’t know what to do
That one is kinda funny.
shouldn’t’t
(Is that enough for you to find this one?)
Another one.
“…and I figured the sooner I as the sooner she’ll calm down.”
should as be ask?
Found another
Not she young when she had everything to live for."
Wait a minute. There is something wrong. But I misunderstood something at the first read. So I am not really sure what would be the right change, sadly.
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“I’ve told you before arctic bears are not to be cuddled. They are deadly creatures trained to serve the military not comfort teenage girls.”
When not to be cuddled, why so cuddleable?
MC has the right mindset
“But why do they look so huggable then? I bet I could lay on top of one, wrap my arms around it and take a long nap.”
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I love this story, it’s one of my favourites, especially the bond with Tempurian. I just wish that he was an RO, is there a reason he isn’t?
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Welcome to the forum! I’m glad you’re liking the story so far!
There are several reasons why I won’t make Tempurion an RO. Primarily because when they first bonded together he was already an adult while MC was only 4, so the idea of him and MC ending up together makes me a bit uncomfortable. Secondly, he hasn’t told MC about this yet, but he is in love with another dragon. Thirdly, I don’t think he would be romantically interested in MC, even if he wasn’t in love with someone else. He generally sees MC as someone he’s supposed to look after, sometimes loaning her his power, and if you have a good relationship with him, he tends to see MC more like a younger sibling.
I’m sorry that it’s disappointing he’s not an RO, but I hope the story will still be enjoyable with one of the actual ROs or the plantonic route.
Igor just doesn’t get it. I’m afraid.
Thank you for reporting those. I will get to them when I have time.
I’m so sorry for just responding, but I somehow didn’t notice this post until now. Luk is 9 in chapter 2 when MC meets him, and it is a bit young, but he has different expectations placed on him than most kids his age.
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Ty! I’m so obsessed. Ur writing is quite immersive. I can’t stop replaying. Ch4 is peak 
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