@Fat_cat Will you rewrite all the chapters that were already posted in the previous demo?
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I’m adding lots of scenes and improving the writing and the lore of the chapter you all played earlier. I’m Also adding lots of scenes before the start of it (Large childhood scenes) and removing some.
You will know what I mean when you read it since what I’m saying is confusing.
Also removing some cringe stuff. Don’t ask me what it is. 
I have since improved over the last time.
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I hope you dont get stuck trying to improve the first few chapters again and again, there have been way too many rewrites imo
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Egon: “Gossa the Gossarian, born in the year 1204, died 1315.”
Pete: “111years old, she hang in there, didn’t she?”
Ray: “Yeah, she didn’t die of old age in fact. She was poisoned, stabbed, shot, hung, stretched, disembowelled, drawn and quartered…”
Pete: “…ouch!”
Egon: “Not exactly a lady of the people, either. Also known as Gossa the Cruel, Gossa the Madness, Gossa the Impaler and Gossa the Blood Duchess.”
Pete: “Wasn’t she also Gossa the Butch?”
Ray: “And here’s the freakish part, she spoke of a prophecy, just before she died: Death is but a door, time is but a key, I’ll be back, gonna impale you all.”
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@Fat_cat if you don’t mind me asking, how big would the update be ?
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Thanks.
I accidentally uploaded part of chapter 1 to the demo, so I removed it quickly.
The writing here has been already improved.
Will let you know soon. I’m aiming for 80k for chapter 1.
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Hey, i wanted to ask, what kind of progression are you going for? Are we waiting for a time skip or is the story going to progress piece by piece?
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I see no one is talking about the elephant in the room so I gotta ask: are we at some point getting a fat cat in game too or your name is just clickbait?
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“My brother have a giant wolf, feh!. All we need is this fat cat. For he shall makes the enemy tremble in fear!”
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This is not an update, but I have now updated the prologue with some childhood scenes and a small part of chapter 1 since the old demo was not working.
I know that you all are waiting for chapter 1, and sorry for the long wait. It is just that the update will be over 80k, so I have to make sure that everything is ready. It will be worth the wait.
Tell me what you think about some of the childhood scenes if you have the time.
I’m aiming for something like the sword of rhivenia in terms of time skips.
The MC’s mother will have a fat cat as a pet. I wanted the MC to have one, but I have a lot on my hands. You can play with your mother’s cat.
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Aaaaaand now I’m going to defend Soniya with my life and love my little bro.
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Only one gay male option 
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Will the MC be able to romance multiple people at the same time like his father?
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I think we can…?
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Stop being so pushy about it already!
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Yeah, but is the hot one, so im happy about it lol and maybe writing that way is not the best of forms to make someone change their work, i mean, its not like we are paying for that to reclaim anything (and even if that was the case)
I mean, im (very) happy with the gay option –he was my fav since I read the description so yeii for me–, but not everyone need to like the same person, with two people at least you can choose (like the case of GxG option, or hetero option) so surely you can understand, having so many characters, it couldnt be very difficult to have one gay or another bi xD and there’s more, if you see the votes, you can see there are a lot of person who considere themself as a “Male” and a big part of the niche are gay-bi, so having another one its not such a crazy idea.
But, again, im happy with the RO and it is not my story so, lo que será, será
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Is it inspired by house of dragons.
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No, Is it inspired by Game of Thrones.
I really need to watch house of dragons, but I’m still salty about season 8. 
You can romance two. But I’m thinking of making an excuse to have the MC only romance one. (Coding and shit and too many ROs) Cannot say for now. We are still a long way from marriage, so I have time to think it over.
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