Finished one of my subscenes, started with another. I’m not sure on the pacing yet, but I’ll be able to check once I’ve fully finished all the flashback sequences (which if done right should be a nice intro/character building segment that also introduces some of the MCs relationships).
Which brings me to a pacing question actually. How do y’all manage to slow down while writing and avoid telling instead of showing? My method so far has been doing a telling draft, then rewriting it until it feels like it isn’t too direct. But I still suffer from telling too much.