False Ancestry (WIP) [100K Words | Prologue Act 2]

What are those choices?

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Edit (I phrased it weird.)
The first choice I said below, but the second choice is the one that gives the most comedic effect. Life is silly sometimes.

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Tried different choices , still locked

Allow me to check the code to make sure it’s doable again.

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It’s possible, you just need to do something and say something to Rachael, for the action, You have to give Rachael your jacket. the other thing, I am sure you can figure it out, if you can’t then let me know.

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Ya figured out the jacket thing already but not getting the second part

You have to bet Rachael that she is going to somehow fall on her ass with the wet floor, specifically “What and miss all the fun?”

Wait, how many people here having gotten the Rachael kiss?

  • I have
  • I still haven’t
  • Rachael who? My Queen is Irene.
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Oh had already done that option, it was still locked. Might be a bug

I updated the game with files that I know for a certain work. give it a try and if it doesn’t then I will try to find the issue.

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I don’t know if the first time i played it i just breezed past the character customization or what, but playing it again i see there isn’t options for anything outside of 3 skin types of African American shades. To me that is a torn off for a game, where i can not play a character that represnts myself or the vision i have for the character I’m playing. As i played through before race didn’t really play into the game itself, so why limit the creation aspect? That would be the one change i would make to this story so far, more options so people can play the character that they wish or that represents themselves.

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I am really not sure how to respond to this, but I will try. Firstly, the main reason race is limited. It’s because it helps the vision of the story that I am trying to tell. I try my best to balance the story between things that I want to do and things that I think the readers would like.

There are some things that I wouldn’t change for the world, and they are some things I have no problem changing. This is a hobby project and something I am doing for fun. It’s unfortunate, that the story isn’t something you can project yourself onto for maximum enjoyment.

But it’s not something that I am going to change, the main character will always be African American, his mother is half African American and half Haitian, and his father is Caucasian. The skin tones are the limit to what customization you can do to the main character’s skin.

If you want to make that type of change, then I would encourage you to write a story that you want to see, the same way I am making the main character African American, because that’s the story I want to write.

I can’t write a story to satisfy everyone. only write the story that I want to the best of my ability.

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did you get it now?

False Ancestry isn’t unique in limited character creation by race. There are other interactive novels that have done this in past where the character is Asian or White. Authors even limit gender which overall is fine since there are also Authors who include race, gender and expand on those in character creation. As a reader it’s all about what you find interesting in reading.

False Ancestry has caught my attention for being urban supernatural. The characters are interesting as well. I can’t wait for the next update.

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How do you even kiss Rachel the option blurr

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At this point I will recode the encounter to make more sense, so I will just drop the requirements right here.

You need to give her your jacket during the skirt scene and then bet her that she is going to fall on the wet floor.

(It was supposed to include you try to catch her too but things happened with the code.)

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The complete hotfix has been released for act 2, which includes the Rachael event that was missing, the new female content and two brand new CJ events.

please let me know if anything is bugged.

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Found this:

prologue line 1413: Non-existent variable ‘met_john’

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alr thanks and fixed

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Enjoyed the new CJ scenes and more implications of the MC’s condition. Btw i have a question the MC’s condition if it’s not a spoiler. So would it be considered a mental disability? Or something else?

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I am glad that you can believe in gravity.

It’s a bit complicated, but it is considered a mental disability within the confines of the story. The Mc has to go to therapy about it, said therapy will be shown in act 3. You can either talk to the therapist or stone wall them.

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